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0 posted 2003-04-01 11:29 PM



Spring Truck Spring

What good's a work truck
on a warm spring day?
The little girls know, waving
from behind the schoolyard fence.
Today I'm waving back and spooling up
my strobes to make them giggle. I know too.
This truck is perfect for a warm spring day.

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1 posted 2003-04-01 11:41 PM


Ed...Little girls know, I guess...what  spring is, and a truck.  Smiles for this!  PS..what is "spooling up my strobes"?
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2 posted 2003-04-01 11:47 PM


   What a refreshing write!!! you fill these pages with so much..... TY for your view of spring! HUGSSS
Lauren~

I close my eyes and there in the shadows I see your light
You come to me out of my dreams
Across the night

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3 posted 2003-04-01 11:49 PM


Heh -- big ole light bar on the top -- two, actually, like a cop's but yellow and white.

Next time you see one, maybe it'll be me, so wave and see if they light up!

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4 posted 2003-04-02 12:44 PM


Ratleader - nice write, nice truck...

BC

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5 posted 2003-04-02 12:59 PM


Well, a nice truck but I hate it if the truth be told..... a 3/4 ton Dodge, with long bed and extended cab.... when you drive up in it everybody assumes you're the boss, but really it's about like driving a school bus.... I'll take small and nimble any day, and earn whatever respect I need without using a vehicle as a crutch....

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6 posted 2003-04-02 01:07 PM


Reading this shot me back in time... I won't confess how many decades. *G* Let's just say I remember being one of those girls... and I really like this! *S*
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7 posted 2003-04-03 01:58 PM


Rat - little girls hmmmm . . .  lol - just kidding - nice write here - nice truck too (miss mine) . . .  xxoo
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8 posted 2003-04-03 02:10 PM


LOL -- been wondering when somebody would bring that up....

By way of moving me toward (but not fully to....) normalcy, this and Riding With Angels /pip/Forum64/HTML/002969.html are from the same day, same street, same time.....this almost ended up as part of that poem.

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