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Oh Mother, Dear Father
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Oh Mother, Dear Father |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York 
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Oh Mother, what has become of you? Dear Father, I speak of you . . . Take one glance around you see what you have created Your ghosts have been bestowed upon us like a place setting at a feast A feast of not food but of our souls which we have been knawing on since birth [This message has been edited by littlewing (04-03-2003 02:50 PM).] |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
amazing piece! |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
Another great write Sue, I ask him alot of questions too. Jason |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Sounds as though you have had a difficult early life. Hope that that is all behind you! ---thank goodness you didn't knaw all of your soul away! You still have lots of it left as is evidenced by your fine poetry! Warm hugs from my wings to yours... Linda |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Brad - thank you so much! Jason - me too - sometimes answers - sometimes I think he ignores me lol thank you - like your perspective . . . much too kind Linda - how beautiful - from my wings to yours . . . I love that - well hey - I guess if it wasnt for this up there I wouldnt be able to write . . . thanks guys xxoo [This message has been edited by littlewing (04-03-2003 09:17 PM).] |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
I wonder what brilliant poet/friend got you to post this here? He should be commended, revered even such a good man, looks like a muppet but pobody's nerfect. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
you know it seems to me that I posted this somewhere else . . . hmmm . . . sat round there for a good month or so . . . all by its poor slef . . . stop trying to talk like me up there already . . . [This message has been edited by littlewing (04-03-2003 09:37 PM).] |
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dreambuilder Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 319caddyshack |
what a powerful write why do fathers never see the damage done & rarely stay involved after too painful ? or just cowards letting the abandoned feal what they refuse to deal with - I could relate - candid & touching [This message has been edited by dreambuilder (04-03-2003 11:21 PM).] |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Thank you dream - can relate to THAT much too well myself . . . xxoo |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Sue, I'm sorry for your difficulties. But I am so impressed by your writing. You make me proud! Keep up the GOOD work.  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Sue, I thought for sure that I had already replied to this. But apparently not. I'm glad that I didn't miss it this time. You know, your user name fits you very well. "littlewing"....like an angel.  Hugs,  Ethel [This message has been edited by garysgirl (04-04-2003 12:40 AM).] |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
littlewing - 'Your ghosts have been bestowed upon us like a place setting at a feast' Left an impression on me, for the ghosts never leave... BC |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Larry - Oh My - you are much too kind to me - thank you! Ethel - goodness - too sweet you are to me - an angel - I wish but thank you - hehehe thats why I picked that name - well that and Hendrix . . . Bill - ahhhh - thank you - so very true - my friend - so true . . . Thanks guys xxoo |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LittleWing~ Poignancy in your penning~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I first thought you were speaking of the Universal Mother and Father ... Anyhow this saddens me, the words cut deep .... it means you have done a great job! Hugs. Margherita |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Marge and Margherita - thank you so much - much to kind Margherits - yes many did see it that way - but no was no tmy intention . . . xxoo |
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