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Jason Lyle
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since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438
With my darkling

0 posted 2003-04-01 04:53 PM


Enraged, I react
Stopping just short of action
Anger makes me weak

Bitterness begets
Harsh words, dark looks, we forget
We love each other

Save all your pity
For Littlewings fieldmouse
Who bleeds before God

Without emotion
You are naked before me
I see through your lies

Words you did not mean
Were spoke against my armour
Meaningless to me

[This message has been edited by Jason Lyle (04-01-2003 08:56 PM).]

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Jason Lyle
Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438
With my darkling
1 posted 2003-04-01 04:57 PM


Posted agian in force, I noticed a dark theme and decided to post together.I realize, pity is count wrong, but I can't fix it, Raphael bought me a drink not to change it.I have been lazy, no more senryu's, I seem to have used them as post with the intent not to work too hard.I like them, I just have been putting off longer writes.
Jason

[This message has been edited by Jason Lyle (04-01-2003 09:10 PM).]

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