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Jason Lyle
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since 2003-02-07
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With my darkling

0 posted 2003-04-01 09:19 AM


Without emotion
You are naked before me
I see through your lies

© Copyright 2003 Jason Lyle - All Rights Reserved
nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
1 posted 2003-04-01 10:15 AM


you have good eyesight then... it is so easy to be deceived these days.

M

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
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New York
2 posted 2003-04-01 12:33 PM


Jason - this is amazing - goodness - what truth - nicely done . . . xxoo
Brad Majors
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Georgia
3 posted 2003-04-01 12:48 PM


This says so much thru so little
Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
4 posted 2003-04-01 12:57 PM


Sorry that you have been lied to but it is an asset to be able to see through the lies of others. At least then, you have the full story and can handle yourself accordingly!

Peace, Love & Light,
Linda

rosepetals25
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PA
5 posted 2003-04-01 02:36 PM


Very nice Very effective haiku. I liked!

Tara

"in my field of paper flowers
and candy clouds of lullaby
i lie inside myself for hours
and watch my purple sky fly over me"
- Imaginary by Evanes

Aenimal
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the ass-end of space
6 posted 2003-04-01 03:44 PM


Excellent work!! I'll get back to you soon on that email btw
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