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Open Poetry #25

Lies

Jason Lyle
Senior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 1438
With my darkling

0 posted 2003-04-01 09:19 AM

Without emotion
You are naked before me
I see through your lies

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2003-04-01 10:15 AM

you have good eyesight then... it is so easy to be deceived these days.

M

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

2 posted 2003-04-01 12:33 PM

Jason - this is amazing - goodness - what truth - nicely done . . . xxoo

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

3 posted 2003-04-01 12:48 PM

This says so much thru so little

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

4 posted 2003-04-01 12:57 PM

Sorry that you have been lied to but it is an asset to be able to see through the lies of others. At least then, you have the full story and can handle yourself accordingly!

Peace, Love & Light,
Linda

rosepetals25

Member Elite

since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

5 posted 2003-04-01 02:36 PM

Very nice

Very effective haiku. I liked!

Tara

"in my field of paper flowers
and candy clouds of lullaby
i lie inside myself for hours
and watch my purple sky fly over me"
- Imaginary by Evanes

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

6 posted 2003-04-01 03:44 PM

Excellent work!! I'll get back to you soon on that email btw

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