Open Poetry #25 |
To Love or To Be In Love |
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
To Love... To know my trust and unconditional feelings for another can never be influenced by change. or To Be In Love... To feel the anticipation of` eyes viewing the outline, your frame coming towards me. My heart voiced in the silence. It's beat pacing itself to footsteps until touch brings the flooding of warmth within. To love is forever. To be in love is a gift, even if momentary. But to awaken each morning to both is the kiss of living. "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." (Will Moss) [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (04-01-2003 07:02 AM).] |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
yes... well said ... regards, Sudhir |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Maureen, Well done enjoyed the read. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Good Morning Sudhir, nice to see you. hugssssss and thanks (I am just trying to rationalize my life a bit, It doesn't necessarily help *s) M |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Hey you...you snuck in between the lines...my favorite place *s hugsssss M |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Sooooooooo beautiful, Maureen! Lovely! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very beautifully said .... indeed nothing changes a perfect love as this! "The kiss of living", wonderful! Love, Margherita |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
thank you Denise and Margherita... now if only I can ever find those two in tandem M |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Maureen if you can find it, let me know where. But wouldn't it be wonderful to have both? Beautifully written. Sandra |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Yes, it would be wonderful to have that feeling again. *s Thank you hugssss M |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Like your thoughts on love...James |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
WynterGal~ Simply B E A U T I F U L expression, my friend~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
JamesMichael, Thank you *s and Marge, some days I am wondering aloud until I have to just put it down somewhere to get it off my mind. Thanks hugs M |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
And what a kiss it is.....Wonderful feeling....and a wonderful write!!!! Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you Bridgette. When it's right you know it M |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Oh, Yes, Maureen. It is absolutely wonderful to be "in love" with the same person you "love". I have always believed that it's impossible to be in love with a person you don't even like. That's why I think it's such a great thing to be best friends with the one you're in love with. Hugs, Ethel |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Maureen...Wonderful write..so true! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
You are very lucky Ethel, although I know luck has nothing to do with it. Thank you Martie hugss M |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Yep! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice read |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
nakd - OMG how lovely! Truth you speak and with elegance - you really shoul dhave submitted this - I just adore it xxoo |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Very Very GOOD!!!!!! Bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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JP Senior Member
since 1999-05-25
Posts 1343Loomis, CA |
Excellent. deep too! JP Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you everyone. I wake up every morning with feelings of love and the wish to be in love, or at least know that it is returned. To love someone and be in love is something, some day I hope to have again. M littlewing, I already have 2 submitted and accepted...that is more than enough of me in one book [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (04-03-2003 04:24 PM).] |
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