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nakdthoughts
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0 posted 2003-04-01 06:59 AM



To Love...

To know my trust
and unconditional feelings for another
can never be influenced by change.

or


To Be In Love...

To feel the anticipation of`
eyes viewing the outline,
your frame coming towards me.
My heart voiced in the silence.
It's beat pacing itself to footsteps
until touch brings the flooding
of warmth within.


To love is forever.

To be in love is a gift, even if momentary.

But to awaken each morning to both
is the kiss of living.


"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)


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Sudhir Iyer
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1 posted 2003-04-01 07:30 AM


yes... well said ...

regards,
Sudhir

Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2003-04-01 07:36 AM


Maureen,
Well done enjoyed the read.

nakdthoughts
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3 posted 2003-04-01 07:38 AM


Good Morning Sudhir,
nice to see you.

hugssssss and thanks (I am just trying to rationalize my life a bit, It doesn't necessarily help *s)

M

nakdthoughts
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4 posted 2003-04-01 07:39 AM


Hey you...you snuck in between the lines...my favorite place *s
hugsssss
M

Denise
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5 posted 2003-04-01 08:40 AM


Sooooooooo beautiful, Maureen! Lovely!
Margherita
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6 posted 2003-04-01 08:46 AM


Very beautifully said .... indeed nothing changes a perfect love as this!
"The kiss of living", wonderful!
Love, Margherita

nakdthoughts
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7 posted 2003-04-01 09:41 AM


thank you Denise and Margherita...

now if only I can ever find those two in tandem

M

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8 posted 2003-04-01 05:44 PM


Maureen if you can find it, let me know where. But wouldn't it be wonderful to have both? Beautifully written.
Sandra

nakdthoughts
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9 posted 2003-04-01 06:35 PM


Yes, it would be wonderful to have that feeling again. *s Thank you
hugssss
M

JamesMichael
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10 posted 2003-04-02 05:33 AM


Like your thoughts on love...James
Marge Tindal
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11 posted 2003-04-02 08:23 AM


WynterGal~

Simply  B E A U T I F U L  expression, my friend~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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nakdthoughts
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12 posted 2003-04-02 10:36 AM


JamesMichael, Thank you *s  

and Marge, some days I am wondering aloud until I have to just put it down somewhere to get it off my mind. Thanks
hugs
M

Justbleu
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13 posted 2003-04-02 11:56 AM


And what a kiss it is.....Wonderful feeling....and a wonderful write!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


nakdthoughts
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14 posted 2003-04-02 06:38 PM


Thank you Bridgette. When it's right you know it

M

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15 posted 2003-04-03 10:57 AM


Oh, Yes, Maureen.  It is absolutely wonderful
to be "in love" with the same person
you "love".  I have always believed
that it's impossible to be in love
with a person you don't even like. That's
why I think it's such a great thing to
be best friends with the one you're in love with.

Hugs,
Ethel

Martie
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16 posted 2003-04-03 11:31 AM


Maureen...Wonderful write..so true!  
nakdthoughts
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17 posted 2003-04-03 11:41 AM


You are very lucky Ethel, although I know luck has nothing to do with it.

Thank you Martie
hugss
M


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18 posted 2003-04-03 01:12 PM


Yep!
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19 posted 2003-04-03 02:06 PM


nice read
littlewing
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20 posted 2003-04-03 02:45 PM


nakd - OMG how lovely!  Truth you speak and with elegance - you really shoul dhave submitted this - I just adore it  xxoo
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21 posted 2003-04-03 02:48 PM


Very Very GOOD!!!!!!
Bernie



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Bernie Slicker

JP
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22 posted 2003-04-03 03:52 PM


Excellent.  deep too!

JP

Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn.
Nil Desperandum, Fata viem invenient

nakdthoughts
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23 posted 2003-04-03 04:23 PM


Thank you everyone. I wake up every morning with feelings of love and the wish to be in love, or at least know that it is returned.

To love someone and be in love is something, some day I hope to have again.

M

littlewing, I already have 2 submitted and accepted...that is more than enough of me in one book

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