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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
Lovescapes My faithful good readers, (there must be someone?) Will say that I mainly just write for the fun. I tell ballad stories that perhaps will rhyme and think they are decent; well some of the time. But sometimes I open a door to my heart And tell you, my friend, of how love, from the start, Has guided my life and has given me joy, Why almost from time past when I was a boy I read of the hearts bared in this loving place and know that they hold fast to love in each case. Each speaks of a scene painted brightly with love with words strong yet gentle that fit like a glove. So what do we call these lines written twixt tears that pour out the feelings and even the fears. Their poignancy grips us and draws us in tight; We cherish these pip friends and solace their plight. For painters who sketch of the sand and the sea, Why seascape’s the word that comes right to me. ’Course meadows and flowers are called a landscape, But naming these love odes puts me in a scrape It happened last night to me reading a note while sighing with warmth of what dear Nancy wrote This scene needs a ‘scape so we lay in supply of tissues for lovescapes that make us just cry [This message has been edited by kayjay (03-31-2003 07:16 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful dear Ken...perfect word..lovescapes! You already know how I feel about this piece.. and the new word he have brought to us here. Poet sir you have penned a  ~Smiles, Hugs & Luv, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
Thank you, dear Nancy, whatever I gain and give with Pip, it is you I thank. KJ Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
So true dear friend..... Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Beautifully expressed Ken...so many of the word written in this site have such powerful impact on those who read them...well done.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Ken, this is lovely, sweet friend, I love the new word and hope you continue to build this new horizon piece by piece in your next poems, after all with you creating such a wonderful word you have the authenticity of the grand design too, am I right, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ken, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Our Nancy, Enchantress, we know both her names, lays low in the meadows then bursts into flames... she sands scapes by sea, then horizons she lights, we know all her names, she's magic's delight! Should thee but listen, our dear own kayjay... heed well all that glistens, hear moments of weigh... for poets will render their hearts held in flight... you could read through the morning, and then into night! For Enchantress has sisters, and brothers who wend each have their words and for pennies will spend a few gathered moments to assure hearts will mend... for life can be horrid, and here, we do tend... to gather us in and give all a new gift... where hearts hear the song of life that's in lift... |
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Pascal Member
since 2003-03-30
Posts 54Ontario, Canada |
Such a beautiful poem - you can feel it comes from the heart and speaks volumes of emotion. Pascal  Believe in yourself and wonderous things will happen |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
Justbleu, friend and Scorpio, and can't forget the Mistletoe, give me heart to write away Sunshine drops by and with a grin The best of rhymes coyly tosses in And Pascal, I thank you for your say. You are all very kind. Ken Through rubble and trouble and dark of night The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light [This message has been edited by kayjay (03-31-2003 09:57 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Into my library with this gem!!  |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
kayjay - the door to your heart was indeed open when you wrote this... BC |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Ken, this is really beautiful. I love that word....."lovescapes" Hugs, Ethel |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
just truly wonderfully beautiful! |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
BC, Ethel and "Passing" too I give thanks for words from you You give me cause in what I write You lift my heart like a soaring kite. Thank you all very much. KJ Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Lovescapes are the poet's favorite playgrounds. Let us play on! Beautifully shaped lovescapes! Margherita |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Yes Ken Perfect - absolutely perfect xxoo |
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