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Standing Together(Lovers Breeze Revized)
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Standing Together(Lovers Breeze Revized) |
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Silver_Tryst Member
since 2003-03-10
Posts 64MT |
This poem is per say about imposable loves, like a fish and a bird. But if you truly have faith and believe in each other, anything is possible. Standing Together…. Lovers forget you love, And listen to the love of these, She is a window flower, And he a winter breeze, Him sweeping through the forest, Singing of his love, As he wrote in the sky, Dear my dearest dove, I want to show them all, We are meant to be together, Us against the world, You and me forever, As she read this letter, And looked unto the sky, "Yes its you I love" Now she to can fly, That’s the gift of love And this is what it brings All you have to do, Is help each other spread your wings, |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Shayne - I loved this! All you have to do, Is help each other spread your wings, Exactly - nice job xxoo |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Nice! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Lyrical! Delightful! A pleasure to read!  Peace, Love & Light, Earth Angel |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Magistic Silver Mage New Member
since 2003-05-09
Posts 4Montana, U.S.A. |
Exelent poem. I wish that I copuld have the same feelings that you have. THANX!!! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very nice write |
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Rdz9 Member
since 2003-03-16
Posts 142MT, USA |
Lovers Breeze was good... This is Very good. Nice write Shayne. One in a sea of millions has the power to change the world... |
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