Open Poetry #25 |
Forbidden Love |
Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
~*~ I tremble at the very thought of you. My pulse quickens whenever you pass by, Lightly brushing up against my quivering body ~ as if it were by chance... Your Sea Spray cologne lingers in the air, Leaving behind the essence of you. I inhale it deeply ~ deep into the me of me... Savoring the scent of your maleness, Lost in a world that cannot be. ~*~ |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
beautifully written |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Brad ~ Thank you! I appreciate you saying so! Peace, Love & Light, EA |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Linda, You captured what I've felt. Thank goodness he is not around I wonder if I'd be able to resist. Great poem, Enjoyed, hugs, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel It's the little things that interest me. Enjoyed. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Linda~How lovely...yet quite sad, filled with longing. Much enjoyed this little gem. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This reminded me SO much of my favorite poem by Donald Justice: Love's Stratagem's But these maneuverings to avoid The touching of hands, These shifts to keep the eyes employed On objects more or less neutral (As honor, for time being, commands) Will hardly prevent their downfall. Stronger medicines are needed. Already they find None of their strategems have succeeded, Nor would have, no, Not had their eyes been stricken blind, Hands cut off at the elbow. (thought you might enjoy, as you seemed to be on the same wavelength.) Thanks for this one Linda. Lovely as you are. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Pat ~ You're sooo cute! Something tells me that you would have nothing to worry about! Luvs & hugs, Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Mr. T. ~ Hmmmm! That in itself is interesting! You intrigue me, master poet! tehe Happy springtime! Happy thoughts! EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Nancy ~ That kind of longing can be bitter sweet! Thank you for dropping by and replying so sweetly. Springtime hugs, Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Serenity ~ I greatly appreciate your having taken the time to write out Donald Justice's poem, "Love's Stratagems". Much enjoyed! Merci beaucoups, mon amie chere! Your closing remarks were very sweet and "lovely". Hugs & stuff, EA |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Sister, you snuck this in when I wasn't looking and I almost missed it. These kind of feelings are so darn hard and unfair .... maybe some day. Hugs and luvs, Marti Few are those who see with their own eyes and feel with their own hearts. A.Einstein |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Hi, Marti! Like most of the Pipsters, I absolutely love to write! I have written everything imaginable: 2 novels, 1 screenplay, hundreds of poems, comic strips, magazine and newspaper articles, 2 children's books, 2 short stories, an outline for a sit-com, a children's play and a novella! ~ It appears that I am writing my own personal library! lol Many of my works I keep going back into, to rewrite passages or to add finishing touches. Some are published but most are just collecting dust! Well, I guess you believe me now when I say I love to write! Love & Joy, Linda |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Linda Your words have the ability to awaken all the senses. I absolutely adore men's aftershave!! "Happiness is a perfume you cannot pour onto others without getting a few drops on yourself." Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
meet him on the other side, within the deep night hours, where secret lovers hide |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
Ahhh..there is nothing as tantalizing as love's interest piqued but unfulfilled. Did you see "Message in a Bottle"? PS I'm a cancer, incurably romantic and loyal as a dog. lol Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssssss) Oh Linda, this is so very heartfelt, sweet friend, I send angel hugs out to you as I know this feeling all too well! (sad sigh) How I long to hold a girls hand for the first time and walk with her, this is very heartfelt, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Linda, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Sue ~ A lovely reply--and a lovely quote! Thank you! Love & Light, Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
inkedgoddess ~ You are so refreshingly honest, forthwright ~ and saucy! Happy springtime! (Try to ignore some the bad stuff that's going on! It literally makes me sick!) Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Ken ~ Shucks! There I did it again! My first thought was Cancer but then my rational mind took over and I said Leo! lol No, I didn't see that movie. Glad there's no cure for romantics such as yourself! The world needs more men like you! Smiles across the miles, EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Noah ~ Your wistful words brought tears to my eyes---then I saw your crying icon and that made them tumble down my cheeks... Your time will come when the time is divine. Loving hugs, EA |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
If this were not forbidden, would the sweet sting linger so? Probably Lovely, Linda |
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Pascal Member
since 2003-03-30
Posts 54Ontario, Canada |
Wow - I had to rush out and splash on Sea Spray. That was incredible - beautifully written! Pascal |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Ed ~ That was a very interesting reply... but then, everything that you write is intriguing! Peace, Love & Light, Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Pascal ~ I love the scent of the ocean ~ so fresh, so clean, so natural and when that scent is on a man, it is even sweeter... Yes, annoint your body with a cologne that conjures up thoughts of the mighty ocean, and you will have women falling at your feet! Peace, Love & Light, EA |
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