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Showing Me How To Be Unselfish
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Showing Me How To Be Unselfish |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA 
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I never have felt about someone this way Or was able so many words of love to convey I must have always selfish love gave Thinkng of myself and my own pride to save Sometimes with couples pride in the way gets Holding back feelings and causing regrets Until a large wall is built in between With silence and bitterness as neither have ever seen Now you give your precious love to me Teaching me how real love should be My needs and wants first you always think of Not fearful to show me your forever love Teaching me that communication must flow Not hiding our feelings but letting them show We both have learned from our mistakes past And are willing to work on helping our love to last Swallowing our pride if that is what it will take To always be together and a happy life make Thinking of the other first not of ourselves instead Always remembering our love and our togetherness ahead ~**~ |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Ethel, this is a wonderful lesson learned and shared -- the power of communication. -MVS You CAN make a difference: |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
...what everyone dreams to have... great job Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you, Mark. Communication sure does clear up little molehills before they turn into mountains, I've learned. I guess I just never thought it was worth the effort before now. I don't know, really. Thanks, Mark.  Heart Hugs, Ethel [This message has been edited by garysgirl (03-31-2003 11:43 AM).] |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you, Kristie Sue. We both feel very blessed. Heart Hugs,  Ethel |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
It doesn't get any better than you describe in this elegant phrasing that you discribe so well. I used the word "lovescape" in a post to Enchantress. I think that is what you paint so well. Ken Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Ethel.. Yes Ken is right...a 'lovescape'..that's what you paint for us. ~Smiles & Hugs sweet poetess~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Very nice Ethel. Enjoyed!! hugs, Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow Ethel....what a write! |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
That just sounds so wonderful, Ethel. God bless, Hugs, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Ethel, a relationship worth working for by caring and communicating. I enjoyed this very much. Hugs for peace, Marti Few are those who see with their own eyes and feel with their own hearts. A.Einstein |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
You pay tribute to this great love so beautifuly. Eric |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) Oh Ethel, when I find my girl if I ever find her soon I never want to commit trickery or deceive her, for all I want is to be is fair to her and make her feel special as trying to find true love can be selfish feeling sometimes! (sad sigh) This is very heartfelt, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Ken, thank you. I love the poem you wrote for Nancy Lee. . . Nancy Lee, thank you. Isn't that a pretty word? Lots of poems could be written from that one word. I know that you've thought of some just like I have. . . Chris, thank you, my sweet friend. . . Dixie, thank you, too, my friend. You're sweet. . . Heart Hugs to you all, Ethel |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Pat, thank you. God bless you, too, my friend. . . Marti, oh yes, our love is well worth it. Thank you, sweetie. . . Eric, thank you so much. I really appreciate that. . . Noah, thank you. I think that when you find your true love, you and her will work things out just fine. . . Heart Hugs to you all, Ethel |
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