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Plain Plane |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state 
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I see the peace..you see the pieces I see the plane, you see the plain a plane gets cranked, a crew gets spanked minds once productive, in jeapardy go blank. It's all a matter of what you see all in the way you climb god's tree can't sit on the john the whole darn day gotta take care of the homestead this ol way gotta regurgitate pieces from a custard pie gotta drop peace messages from skirmished skies gotta shoot the goose that lays the golden egg gotta throw the die, gamble on a wooden leg boot up the shute, slide into army boots see the plane..the rain falls mainly on see the plane's pieces...on the plain? your on!!! [This message has been edited by ecrivan (03-31-2003 08:53 PM).] |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
that was different... you're right...sometimes two people can see two completely different things.... Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
interesting piece |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I see the crescent..you see the whole of the moon. Excellent write Martin! Good to see you here my friend. ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Very creative! Eric |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
KristySue to see the whole or just its part you're always on....from go you start where is the continuity? [This message has been edited by ecrivan (04-02-2003 12:56 AM).] |
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