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Aenimal
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0 posted 2003-03-30 11:56 PM


Enveloped in the down
of an angel's warm embrace
I am unworthy

[This message has been edited by Aenimal (03-31-2003 12:01 AM).]

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MARK V SHELDON
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1 posted 2003-03-31 12:09 PM


Don't be so hard on yourself.  Sounds like you are most worthy if an angel chooses to hug you, so savour it if even for an imaginary moment...

-MVS

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2 posted 2003-03-31 12:14 PM


....we all are... but you're certainly worthy to describe it. Excellent work.

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Aenimal
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3 posted 2003-03-31 12:16 PM


Thanks Mark..i just don't feel it..not just yet. And me hard on myself whatever gave you that idea? The constant word flagellation tip you off? lol...whooooooo
Aenimal
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4 posted 2003-03-31 12:16 PM


Thanks Ratleader..slipped in there during my response..
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5 posted 2003-03-31 12:21 PM


What, you didn't feel the beat of my wings underneath you?
Uh oh, that didn't come out quite right.

Aenimal
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6 posted 2003-03-31 12:29 PM


It came out in perfect Kacy fashion lol
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7 posted 2003-03-31 12:37 PM




ROTFL. Yes, perhaps it did. MY wings have been singed a few times, so they may not always feel so downy. But as long as they gift you a lift upwards, I suppose they still have some value.
What am I saying??? I don't even believe in angels. Aha, but I am a loon, and loons have feathers, so...  

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8 posted 2003-03-31 06:00 AM


A lovely thought! What really counts is that the Angel thinks you are worthy! You just called him ...and that's beautiful.
Un abbraccio (angelico, se vuoi!)
Margherita

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9 posted 2003-03-31 06:10 AM


Raph - "May the greatest golden sight wrap you sweetly in its wings"  

I love this - you are worthy . . . listen to Margherita - a woman of wisdom . . . xxoo

Kacy - hahahaha - OMG - As for the rest of you - I feel much better about my insane ramble I posted lmao - having too much fun  . . . am I sleeping?    

[This message has been edited by littlewing (03-31-2003 06:11 AM).]

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10 posted 2003-03-31 09:31 AM


you are most certainly worthy! and great job btw!! LOL

Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS

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11 posted 2003-03-31 09:33 AM


Oh what a lovely thought..
and I am sure you are most worthy.
~Smiles & Angel Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Aenimal
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12 posted 2003-03-31 09:42 AM


awwwwwwww shucks thanks everyone but i need alot of work before i believe it myself..but thanks!!!

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13 posted 2003-03-31 09:52 AM


I should be so lucky, to be hugged by an angel. I always liked modesty tho....
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14 posted 2003-03-31 10:10 AM


Now, Raphey...you know we Mother-hens
don't like for you to keep putting
yourself down. I, personally think that
you are much more worthy than you think.
If not, why would your Angel want to
embrace you with her wings? She sees in
you what you possibly don't even see
in yourself, friend.

By the way, this is another excellent
write in a few words.

Heart Hugs,
Ethel

Aenimal
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15 posted 2003-03-31 12:20 PM


morefiah she/he'll find you eventually

Ethel why would she want to embrace me..hmm insanity? Blindness?

BluesSerenade
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16 posted 2003-04-01 10:08 PM


You would not be embraced if you weren't worthy dear Raph~ No question about it!

Now, I will try to take my own advice,
it's always easier said than done...
but it's true~

Smiling at you~

Corinne
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17 posted 2003-04-01 10:16 PM


Hmm, sounds like you are quite worthy!

Cor


Aenimal
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18 posted 2003-04-01 10:21 PM


Thanks for the smiles Blues and the kind words

Thanks Cor, well that's what they tell me

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19 posted 2003-04-01 11:44 PM


I feel almost unworthy to read this, you say so much in so few.....


Lauren~

I close my eyes and there in the shadows I see your light
You come to me out of my dreams
Across the night

littlewing
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20 posted 2003-04-02 02:50 AM


. . . insanity . . .  *wink*

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21 posted 2003-04-02 04:11 AM


definately not blindness....
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22 posted 2003-04-03 08:16 PM


it's always easier said then done but someday you'll believe it you know..but you are soo worthy what you talking about dawg lol *feels so unworthy right now* whatever tho..loved it..now I have Angel stuck in my head..its hrm..n/m..

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

Aenimal
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23 posted 2003-04-03 09:21 PM


Lauren come on now lol

Thanks Coco..

Dixie it's partial blindness i assure you

Word C, you don't be dissing y'sef r'else I'm bout to get medieval on yo @$$ now raise yo hands in da air cause we about to blow the lid off dis mofo a'ite?!


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24 posted 2003-04-07 06:01 AM


an embrace of an angel is bestowed upon us all you must embrace it yourself  
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