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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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A prisoner in solitaire my brain was tapping on the pipes waiting with a throbbing vein of listening intense and that became the beat-drum-beat impatient recklessness pounding like my pacing feet on a floor of bare concrete remembering the feel of street counting off the memories as I heard the rattle-wheels of dinner being served. Trained to drool, if not for food, then at least, some company-- a moment of humanity-- I felt fondness for turn-key disgusted with myself. My head was pounding dots and dash morse code in a ray of hope I never dared believe was there. Tapping walls of skull in seek-- I heard the rattled keys return, opening the door of cell blackjacked answers on my head to questions that I didn't know that I had even asked. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Trained to drool, if not for food, then at least, some company-- a moment of humanity-- **** I love that imagery! LOL, but you'd be so pretty even in dressed in drool! |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Trained to drool, if not for food, then at least, some company a moment of humanity just nodding my head..at this |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
K - I heard the rattled keys return, opening the door of cell blackjacked answers on my head to questions that I didn't know that I had even asked. If my wings could take me through this wintery sky - I would do so if only to see you smile . . . this is amazing writing xxoo |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
hmmm...vewwy vewwy intwesting... :-) good job... Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
"Tapping walls of skull" .... hmmmmmmmmm ... This is a very interesting write... much enjoyed... regards, Sudhir |
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