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edh
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0 posted 2003-03-30 02:31 PM



How perfect and brave you are Oh love.
My love has nothing to fear.

Through death of a thousand kingdoms.
Their castles dsappear.

How sweet the sound of words you say.
My ears delight me so.

The cadence of all drummers.
A thousand bands shall never know.

How many loves have I of you.
All storybooks can't tell.

How many dreams have I of you.
A bottomless wishing well.

How much the wind has softened time.
Since I discovered you.

A rainbow's end on mountains high.
A voice with sounds anew.

How beautiful your garden.
The trees and flowers abloom.

I will rest here forever in
tapestries of your loom.

And I will always speak of
your love my dearest.....

Bridegroom.

© Copyright 2003 edh - All Rights Reserved
Sunnyone
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1 posted 2003-03-30 02:37 PM


Oh, this is so special, and full of beautiful thoughts!  As a fairly new bride, I really enjoyed reading this, and would love to vote it in, but can't find a box to check.  If you repost it and add the vote box, I promise to come back, as it belongs in the book!!!!  

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart  ~~S~~

[This message has been edited by Sunnyone (03-30-2003 02:37 PM).]

Brad Majors
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2 posted 2003-03-31 11:29 AM


I agree with sunnyone it is indeed beautiful!
Sunshine
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3 posted 2003-03-31 03:10 PM



This has such a gentle
cascading feel to it...

Enjoyed this very much!  Thank you!

        Karilea - If I whisper, will you listen?...

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