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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2003-02-18 02:57 PM


Beauty of The Lotus Blossom

The beauty of blossoming
flowers becons to me.
The scent of her aroma
gently seducing me.
How can I gaze upon her blossoms
without wanting to touch her beauty,
to smell her alluring aroma,
to linger in her presence?
As I become saturated by
her sweet aromic scents,
and seduced by her silky textures
I partake and I am fulfilled
in the magic of smell and touch and feel.
I linger until all the beauty
of the lotus blossom is revealed
within the arms of her sweet love.

JamesLee
February17
2003

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1 posted 2003-02-18 03:27 PM


such beautiful imagery!
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2 posted 2003-02-18 04:47 PM


Yes! That's exactly how it is with a lotus blossom.....or a Lotus Blossom.....yes, exactly.

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3 posted 2003-02-18 04:48 PM


Very very artistic.  I enjoyed the emotions involved.

CD

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4 posted 2003-02-18 04:57 PM


Beautifully said. Such emotion....very lovely.

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5 posted 2003-02-18 05:04 PM


I really enjoyed this.

Maree.

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6 posted 2003-02-18 05:22 PM


This scent has really touched you beautifully.
Margherita

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7 posted 2003-02-18 08:57 PM




(smiles) Yay! Oh James, this is so beautiful, sweet friend, this made me smile and I hope you get buried deeper and deeper into the pollon of loves beauty, yay, this is majestic, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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8 posted 2003-02-18 09:07 PM


Hello James

I haven't been at PIP for some time now but I must admit I chose the best poem to read on my return.  Your words were a delight to the senses and I hope all is well with you.

Take care.......Sue

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I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
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9 posted 2004-09-04 07:52 PM


Thank you all for the lovely responses...James
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