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Missing You
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Missing You |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Missing You no I am not casually lost when you are gone dreams become sleepless trances void is just sheer absent lacking swirling words escape ink all I want shows blank pages time and I do a lonesome waltz thoughts escape on missing in theory I could possess patience but I am not good at waiting |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
"but I am not good at waiting"...you write with honesty and beauty! |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
this is a wonderfull write.... has a haunting dream like feel i love it... ~~ Connie ~~ |
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Seraphine_CoB Junior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 14LONDON, UK |
i like the emphisis upon the difference between being lost and dependant and separating want, from consuming need. love Sephie xxxxxxx |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
that's how I feel although I don't get to end the "missing" *s M |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
i know how it feels  enjoyed |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Once again you have captured beauty with your words. Eric |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
as always... |
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