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rosepetals25

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0 posted 2003-03-30 11:51 AM

Spring At Last

The beauty of spring
That we eagerly await
Is finally here

Those clear bright blue skies
soft clouds moving with the wind
takes your breath away

The awe of rebirth
vivid colors exploding
for the eyes to see

soothing the spirit
with its own gentle beauty
spring has arrived.

"in my field of paper flowers
and candy clouds of lullaby
i lie inside myself for hours
and watch my purple sky fly over me"
- Imaginary by Evanes
[This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (03-30-2003 11:53 AM).]

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now

1 posted 2003-03-30 11:54 AM

rosepetals25 - great graphics with this write. Spring is the best time of the year me thinks, everything comes alive with it...

BC

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2 posted 2003-03-30 11:55 AM

....and by this we see that your pseudonym is well chosen indeed.....

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rosepetals25

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3 posted 2003-03-30 12:24 PM

Bill - I needed some inspiration.. and I found this picture. After writing the senryus, I knew I needed to put the picture up with the poem

I'm glad you liked!

Ratleader - Thank you for stopping in

Tara

"in my field of paper flowers
and candy clouds of lullaby
i lie inside myself for hours
and watch my purple sky fly over me"
- Imaginary by Evanes

passing shadows
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4 posted 2003-03-30 12:57 PM

wonderful work!

Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song

5 posted 2003-03-30 12:58 PM

Tara, isn't it wonderful ... the inspiration given us by the beauties and warmth of nature's rebirth? Loved these

Mistletoe Angel

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6 posted 2003-03-30 02:37 PM

(smiles) Yay, and with spring blooming, may all the robins and orioles sing aloud and your flower-bed be polished with prisms and rainbows! (kiss on cheek) This is a lovely write, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tara, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Midnitesun

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7 posted 2003-03-30 03:38 PM

Can I keep this one? Thanks!

Robert Frazier
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8 posted 2003-03-30 04:26 PM

well written, and beautiful.

Rf

rosepetals25

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9 posted 2003-03-31 11:25 AM

passing shadows - Thank you

Noah - Thank you for your kind words

Midnightsun - I'm glad you liked it! Thank you.

Robert - Aww.. thank you. I love haikus/senryus.. they are just my nitch

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Tara

"in my field of paper flowers
and candy clouds of lullaby
i lie inside myself for hours
and watch my purple sky fly over me"
- Imaginary by Evanes

Auguste

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By the sea

10 posted 2003-04-01 04:29 PM

Tara, this is very pretty. Spring has finally arrived. Hugs, my friend

The stars will shine when I am gone,
the earth will turn on as before,
the gulls, still race along the shore,
the morning star, still kiss the dawn

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