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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Eternities Imperfection Eternity’s imperfection Is changes indigestion? Its insatiable appetite By the maw of the black holes night Evolutions magic tide A version of Jeckle and Hyde Chemistries subtle euphony Into forevers never be Implosion of liberty Of agony and ecstasy A moment’s conscious ride Flowing on eternities tide. So mark you well the moments spell This infinitesimal dwell This dogma of illusion This paradox confusion Sing your song and ring your chime You are, eternity’s time. |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Good Sunday Morning Seymour! Am I early? Or am I just in time? lol. Your wonderful write to-day reminded me .... especially the first stanza of the song that went "The object of my affection, could change my complexion, from white to rosey red." Remember that tune? It's amazing how a poem can transport our thoughts. Enjoyed. Apple Spice Muffins to-day! Where is my sister with the tea?!! hugs to you, Chris  "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Chris, Yes I do remember that song and I'm sure your sister must be asleep.  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Asleep?? Moi? Asleep?? No way! I was brewing you a fresh pot of Chai tea love!  Much enjoyed this mornings pearls of wisdom. I recall that song too... Also remined me of that old saying, "Well, ring my chimes!" ~Morning hugs and tea~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nancy, Good morning dear, |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ 'mark you well the moments spell' And I am caught in yours~  *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, You are a sweetheart, |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Chemistries subtle euphony Into forevers never be Implosion of liberty Of agony and ecstasy A moment’s conscious ride Flowing on eternities tide. ================================== Your couplet of wisdom's way cool make me muse smile at your wile as it sends me back to school to learn the poetic golden rule. Thats my way of saying your rhymes are the raspberry winkies of my day *L* *ww*   "and when we get to the pearly gates ... |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Seymour - another excellent write from a poet master's pen... BC |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
Evolutions magic tide A version of Jeckle and Hyde Love this pair of lines...and the rest, of course. Ken Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
big smile |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Oh Seymour, yes, eternity is really not a quality, it is in us all along and we represent the hope for eternity and that is what makes it closer to perfect! (big hugggssssss) Love this, dearest friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, And your my raspberry winkies. WWRS Bill , Thank you my friend. Ken, Thank you so much. passing shadows Thanks for the smile. Noah, Enjoyed your reply. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
So mark you well the moments spell This infinitesimal dwell This dogma of illusion This paradox confusion So much wisdom in your thoughtful thoughts, they put my mind to rest, and I thank you for that. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
great read as always sy |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
SY - as always - quite stunning: This infinitesimal dwell This dogma of illusion This paradox confusion this sounds like me . . . xxoo |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
BluesSerenade A lovely reply, thank you. Aenimal Thank you my friend. littlewing I hope it sounds like all of us. |
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