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1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-03-30 03:12 AM



Moon Dream

I have waited
in patient
anticipation
holding out
for the dawn
to break darkness
in a moon dream
just a spark
to fly from
under weight
of sky
now one flicker
has brought
twilight fireworks
to tear into night
once so inactive
and light floods
open to
miracle sight
melting the colors
of me
and my heart
belongs to you


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passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
1 posted 2003-03-30 03:14 AM


beautiful ending!
majnu
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since 2002-10-13
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SF Bay Area
2 posted 2003-03-30 03:15 AM


beautiful dream.

-majnu
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136
Mobile, AL
3 posted 2003-03-30 03:21 PM


lovely, Lady.

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