navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #25 » Hidden
Open Poetry #25
Post A Reply Post New Topic Hidden Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
Dance
Junior Member
since 2003-03-28
Posts 34


0 posted 2003-03-29 10:50 PM



You think you feel my heart,
You think you feel my soul.
But how little do you know.

I have hidden me from you,
And now you try to guess who.
But you'll never understand,
no one ever does.

You laugh and you roar,
not knowing you are hurting me even more.
There you go,
on with the show.
The show of your life,
that I am told.

© Copyright 2003 Dance - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2003-03-29 10:57 PM


This is a sad poem. But a wonderful write.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Midnitesun
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Empyrean
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647
Gaia
2 posted 2003-03-30 01:43 PM


Come on out into the open, and dance.


Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #25 » Hidden

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary