Open Poetry #25 |
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Finding A Way |
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SweetSerenity Member
since 2003-02-16
Posts 52Canada |
I open my eyes and now face the day I am awake but don't know what to say The hurt in my heart has made me weak So much pain with no words to speak At this point, I hate you so much But part of me still longs for your touch Not long ago, we had a special bond Of each other, we were dearly fond We never wanted to spend any time apart Slowly but surely, I let you into my heart But after awhile, you felt we weren't right Night after night, with me you would fight I fell asleep with tears on my face Everything around me felt out of place All of a sudden, we didn't get along To you, everything I did was wrong You suddenly decided that we must end You even said you couldn't be my friend I slowly realized we've lost that connection But you're still the object of my affection Now I must begin to find a way To go on with life and face a new day All of a sudden, I am left to stand All alone, without your soothing hand I must now realize that you are gone With me, you've decided you no longer belong Throughout the nights all I did was cry But now my soul bids me to try To piece together back my broken heart And attempt to make a brand new start Throughout this ordeal, you've only caused me pain But I shall see the sun through the rain And now with confidence, I'm able to say I slowly, but surely, am finding a way ~A touch of Sweetness . . . . . A lifetime of Serenity~ |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Another sad yet beautiful write. I love it. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Nice write..... Bridgette ![]() "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This is very sad, though it is beautifully written. Heart Hugs ![]() Ethel [This message has been edited by garysgirl (03-23-2003 10:07 AM).] |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
A sad, but well written piece. I understand this so well. I have been right where you are. It will take some time, but it will get better. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
SweetSerenity - a sad write but one with courage. Wish you the best, and keep your chin up, tomorrow will come and it's another beautiful day... BC |
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SweetSerenity Member
since 2003-02-16
Posts 52Canada |
I appreciate everyone supporting my writing. I am still working hard to keep on improving! ~A touch of Sweetness . . . . . A lifetime of Serenity~ |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I like this, and I like your note, SSerenity...I think anyone who strives for perfection understands early on that it's imperative to neve say "this is good enough..." Good for you! |
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