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Water Lilly |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Trickling into petals splayed To dance the rippling pools Opened full so innocent In tranquil evening cools And closed beneath the touch of night The shyest flower it seems In delicate of morning mist Awakened trepid dreams To play the day on babbling sounds In lipid blue of wet playgrounds With pretty petals outstretched smiles Upon the water's sweet beguiles In bath of shade The sun to peek Yet covered up These buds so meek Intrepid trembles float serene On blanket soft in moss boat green Trickling on in happy beads Of mists that shower all she needs Copyright Kkh 3/28/03 [This message has been edited by ThisDiamond (03-29-2003 02:08 PM).] |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
ThisDiamond...What a visual masterpiece this is!! Nature brought alive by your colorful and endearing images. I adored this poem. ***Ivy Rose |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
A wonderful write from beginning to end! Love water lilies--love your poem!!!  Peace, Love & Light, EA |
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Alicethruglass Member
since 2001-06-19
Posts 368 |
The shyest flower never thought of it that way...but I am waiting for the warmth to bring them to bloom ~A~/M |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
TD...this is so very beautiful, as all your poetry is.  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I love ponds and water lilies too and your beautiful poem is deeply enjoyed. Love, Margherita |
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