Open Poetry #25 |
Every Gesture |
Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
I fall in love a thousand times a day. A gesture...a wave...a touch...a smile, and I am lost - falling endlessly, hopelessly into the still pool of Her love. The beloved peeks shyly from this hiding, as if inviting me to find Her in some holy game of hide and seek. Only it is I who hide from Her behind eyes that see only part of the story. And yet somehow.... She finds me, in these odd moments, in a gesture...a wave...a touch...a smile. She finds me - and shares Her story. Every gesture is a story Told, and every story begins with you. I read the curve of Your smile - And know the ending. |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
To know the ending early in life...and not to know a proper beginning, that is sad but very human. nice form Ericc |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
So beautiful and so true .... little gestures that have great meaning for eyes that see ... or better for hearts that see! Love is everywhere and expresses itself in infinite ways. You capture it so well! Love, Margherita |
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Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
Eric, this is incredible. Loved every gesture... Sunkissed. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Ericc - I love this - you know I do : Only it is I who hide from Her behind eyes that see only part of the story is lovely - as always - such insight xxoo |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
My goodness, she must be extra special! You evened capitalized "Her" as if she is an exaulted deity! It is wonderful when a man truly appreciates the woman in his life. Warm hugs, Earth Angel [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (03-29-2003 03:27 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Oh Eric, this is lovely, sweet friend, this made me smile as so many of your lovely words do, yay! (big hugggssssss) May your love story always shine happily ever after, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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