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Whisper
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Whisper Whispers dipped in gilded awe. Play the wind and seek to store. Reaching for a mind to wed. Sleeping on a feather bed. Resting in an ivory tower. Brighter then the brightest flower Stays within my laden seems. Rules my night with golden dreams. Frees my goals with amnesty. Holds my souls serenity. Pleading in blind justice ear. To balance me the blind of fear She flies my castle like a dove. Fills my sky alight with love. Tenders me in altars prayer. Sooths my life with loving care. What would I do without her light? My life would be an endless night. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah a beautiful light and lovely read this morn Sy!  I'm in a rush...Chai tea is ready, Nightshade will be in shortly with goodies for you to nibble on I'm sure. ~Morning hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nancy, Thank you love and I love dancing in the summer rain.  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Whispers dipped in gilded awe. Play the wind and seek to store. Reaching for a mind to wed. Sleeping on a feather bed. =================================== Frees my goals with amnesty. Holds my souls serenity. Pleading in blind justice ear. To balance me the blind of fear ============================== Tenders me in altars prayer. ================================ What would I do without her light? My life would be an endless night. ================================ My OH MY.... will ya just look at these couplets of clever way cool and word play...hows a moth supposed to pick when shes giddy?  Reaching for a mind to wed. Sleeping on a feather bed. Pleading in blind justice ear. To balance me the blind of fear Tenders me in altars prayer. ~~~~ and then lets talk bout that closing pair.... hows a moth supposed to type when shes *sighing* Whispering *winkiewinkie* in your ear ... telling that you are all I hold dear. Whispering an invite to join me in tea for two ... Ok make it three and bring Randy along with you. *L*   [This message has been edited by Janet Marie (03-29-2003 08:41 AM).] |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Whispers dipped in gilded awe. Play the wind and seek to store. Reaching for a mind to wed. Sleeping on a feather bed Seymour - oooh, I love this gentle write to-day. Let's see...ummm...banana bread this morning? Okie Dokie! hugs, Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, Just for a moment Randy was real worried, but since you included him all's well that ends well. Your comments are always a ray of sunshine and often make my skin pink. And you know of course that it never turns to a tan. WWRS Chris, Okie Dokie, Hugs Sy |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Sy, Initially, I wanted to tell you the very first line, my favorite. But, as I keep reading, the entire poem is equally beautiful. This one is special. Thoroughly enjoyed. Hugs, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Pat, And your replies are special, |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Oh Seymour, this is lovely, sweet friend, I long ever so much for this whisper too as I long to hold loves hand for the first time! (big hugggsssssss) This sings like a dove, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Lovely Sey....always a pleasure to read you Charisma |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Thank you Noah. Charisma, Your pleasure is my pleasure. |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Ohhhh so lovely Sy ~ just so lovely ~ Bonnie |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good afternoon, Mr. T.! A right write! Your whispers are pure gold and the one who hears them is most worthy! I thank you!-- Oh, oh! Here she comes!-- Just joking around, Isabel! Honestly! Angels never tell lies---well, maybe just little white ones! Peace, Love & Light, EA |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Oh, Seymour, I love whispers..... Heart Hugs, Ethel |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Bonnie, I thank you for the just lovely. Earth Angel Just little white ones, I'll forgive you that. LOL And it should be so, for I myself have molded a few. Ethel, As long as you whisper about the right things. |
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Khryannalin Junior Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 10Winnipeg, MB, Canada |
Such wonderfully expressed emotions. I hope to see more of your obvious talent. Katherine |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
I really enjoyed this. I liked the image "brighter than the brightest flower." It was just amaizing. Poetry does not know age, |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
In whispers sought so shall you seek just before gold words then shall speak and leave a rhyme in time with give, so that we all might learn and live... brave heart be within soul of thee as we rejoice in your poetry...  [This message has been edited by Sunshine (03-29-2003 07:40 PM).] |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
SY - this is just beautiful - as always She flies my castle like a dove. love this line . . . xxoo |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Add me to the list of sighs... it's always good to read you Sy. Have you considered submitting this for the book? If so, you definately have my vote! Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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