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Aenimal
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the ass-end of space

0 posted 2003-03-28 10:01 PM


I placed mirror to lips
for glimpse of breath
but he drew no more

I laid head upon his chest
and wept, remembering
all I had forgotten

And in remembering
I heard the faint murmur
of a heartbeat

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inkedgoddess
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1 posted 2003-03-28 10:46 PM


you okay?
DonFurr
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2 posted 2003-03-28 10:58 PM


What a happy story.
Thank you!

Bind  me sole and Soul to the One
Together to pour Love into the world
until tears of joy fall like rain


noah j
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on the open road with the wind blowing in my hair
3 posted 2003-03-28 11:07 PM


interesting

the only people for me are the mad ones-mad to live, mad to be saved, desirous of everything at once--jack kerouac

wranx
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Moved from a shack to a barn
4 posted 2003-03-29 12:17 PM


Lazarus? Phoenix?

Don't mind me....Its SPRING!!

But? I know this....well

Aenimal
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5 posted 2003-03-29 12:32 PM


inked no but maybe eventually

Don not quite at least not yet

thanks noah

Ed thanks, I know you do it's why i read, maybe we should compare notes..or you can talk and i can learn


GG
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Lost in thought
6 posted 2003-03-29 12:41 PM


I think.. I understand. I wish I didn't.
ah pain.. powerful

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

garysgirl
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7 posted 2003-03-29 12:47 PM


Raph??

Heart Hugs to you, friend,
Ethel

Aenimal
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8 posted 2003-03-29 01:12 AM


Alyssa believe it or not if you cut through the dark of this there is hope

Thanks Ethel can always use those

littlewing
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9 posted 2003-03-29 03:24 AM


Raph - its here isnt it?  It is all right here:

And in remembering
I heard the faint murmur
of a heartbeat

your own . . . is still there . . . xxoo  

[This message has been edited by littlewing (03-29-2003 03:52 AM).]

Margherita
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Eternity
10 posted 2003-03-29 12:50 PM


In remembering, in point of drifting to nothingness, life unveiled its hidden charm to you .... and your heart, gratefully, went on. So profound!
Un abbraccio.
Margherita

Aenimal
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11 posted 2003-03-29 12:55 PM


Yes sue i'm trying to listen more intentely

Margherita grazie e un abbracio

passing shadows
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12 posted 2003-03-30 04:11 AM


been there...gone back many times
Aenimal
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13 posted 2003-03-30 04:31 AM


as have i Dixie, this time I'm hoping it beats a little longer
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