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Goldboat Member
since 2003-02-17
Posts 66 |
Lost Ship ----By Excelorchid The mast broke off, contact lost with the destination, and started to drift. Torn apart by the hands of the wind again and again. Your tears fall from the pain. Softly touched like flowers into four words: In spite of itself. The ocean waves wreaked havoc, one slap after another the body is pounded and sways unable to withstand, who can master the waves? Don¡¯t let both sides suffer, neither side gains. ---Translated by Goldboat ¡¶ÃÔ´¬¡· ---À¼Òݳ¾ ´¬Î¦¶Ïµô£¬¾Í´ËÓëÖÕµãʧȥÁªÏµ ¿ªÊ¼Á÷ÀË ·çµÄÊÖ˺³¶ÓÖ˺³¶ ÄãÍ´µÄµôÏÂÀáÀ´ ÄÇ»¨Ò»ÑùµÄÈáÈí¸§Ãþ³ÉËĸö×Ö Éí²»Óɼº º£ÀË¿ªÊ¼ËÁÅ°£¬Ò»ÕƽÓÒ»ÕÆ ÔÒµÄÉíÌåÒ¡»Î²»¿° ËÄÜ°ÑÀËÍ·Óù¼Ý£¿ ÈÃËü²»ÒªÔÙÕâÑùµÄÁ½°Ü¾ãÉË |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Goldboat - I believe that this is the first I've read of yours. I like what I've read. My vote is cast... Email me if you would. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Yes, only one side must be pushed against so the other can ship you to shore! (big hugggsssss) This is so well described, sweet friend, I know this struggling feeling, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet You, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
You Wang Ge, er, i don't have the software required to decipher Chinese characters so i'm afraid i can't read the Chinese version of this poem... do you mind telling me the title and author of this poem in Hanyu Pinyin so that i can search for the poem myself? thanks!! |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
Sometimes you can't master the waves...you just have to ride along with em' good job... Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS |
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Goldboat Member
since 2003-02-17
Posts 66 |
kaile: Here is the title and author of this poem in Hanyu Pinyin: Mi Chuan --by Lan Yichen |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
I like this..... Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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