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MARK V SHELDON
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0 posted 2003-03-27 10:09 AM


TWENTY OR LESS...#115

Copyright 2003 by:MARK V SHELDON


spring's party


found no love

no grace


no end


You CAN make a difference:
http://educate-yourself.org/

© Copyright 2003 Mark V Sheldon - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-03-27 10:12 AM


(chuckling)... so fitting...

well done Mark... as usual.. I enjoyed


Martie
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2 posted 2003-03-27 10:28 AM


Mark...The impact of a few words always surprises me.  
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3 posted 2003-03-27 10:46 AM


How true Mark...how true.
Well done.
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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4 posted 2003-03-27 10:52 AM


Hmmm! Food for thought!
Love the line "Spring's party"!

A little poem of big contrasting concepts...

Peace & Light,
EA

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5 posted 2003-03-27 10:56 AM


Enjoyed!

Sunkissed.

MARK V SHELDON
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6 posted 2003-03-27 02:31 PM


Ron...  if only it were humorous...  Thanks for the read & reply.

Martie, perhaps it's like Hitchcock's cinema style applied to poetry...?  (...let the mind fill in what's NOT revealed...).  Thank you for stopping in.

Hi Nancy:  a morning hug to you.

EA:  That's the line which "breaks" it all...

Sunkissed:  thank you!  Stay tuned for more...

-MVS

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7 posted 2003-03-28 01:37 AM






(sigh) Spring need not find grace and love for spring IS grace and love! (big hugggsssssss) This is lovely, sweet friend, spring is a little bit of every color on the pallette, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Mark, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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