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It Comes To This
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It Comes To This |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
It Comes To This One time it was just me and you. My heart liked that arrangement and was more than eager to be true. But to you it was all about pretend. You messed it up before it could begin. I never would have promised to love you do if I had know to me you would not be true. Soon we'll say our last goodbyes. You'll probably laugh and I'll surely cry. I hate to watch love die. JamesLee March27 2003 |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
awwww heart-felt piece you wrote here! ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Very tender and full of grace and beauty. Eric |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Ohh James - so do I - so do I - love this - I do - I do - hurts this one . . . nice job xxoo |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Love hurts alright James... Good write. ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
So beautiful and so sad ... Love, Margherita |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
You'll probably laugh and I'll surely cry -------- this is sad... regards to you James, Sudhir |
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Aya Junior Member
since 2003-03-25
Posts 42New Zealand |
You write beautifully and your poem has just given me a bit more insparation on the latest poem im writing and was having trouble with. Thank you, and keep up the great work  Aya |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
James, Me too, well done. |
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