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Pulse In My Veins
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Pulse In My Veins |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
There is a pulse in my veins your blood and mine mingled together coursing through two bodies bonded from before time. I held you in my arms, cradled you in the shadow of my smile, fed you what I had eaten. You tasted everything that I tasted. Drank everything that I drank. I felt your feet pushing against my ribs. You were molded from my bone, pared from my flesh. You are far away, now. Living in another state, grown into a uniform; yet still connected, still mine. Your breath ever on my heart, the beat of your heart pulsing out my favorite tune. You are never out of my sight nor far from my mind. For you are the pulse in my veins, the blood of my blood, the son whom I bore. Nothing can ever separate us. No, not even the grim tide of war. There is a God far greater that cradles us both in His Hand. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Ivy Rose - I read deep love for a son, a very touching write. Has my vote... BC |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, a mother and son's love is always so special and your son will always be blessed to have you as his loving mom! (kiss on cheek) Oh Ivy, I have missed you and your fabulous poems so much, I send extra special angel hugs your way, yay, you have my special vote, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ivy, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Ivy - this is lovely - touched me deep - my own son - not overseas but the bond between a mother and son is something sacred and never can be broken - this is beautiful God Bless you both xxoo |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
yes!! How I recognize these feelings so well, Thank you for sharing your beautiful translated loving heart  ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
So very beautifully said.. the love of a mother for her son.. especially one who is now in harm's way. Excellent write. ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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morefiah Member
since 2003-03-26
Posts 150Spanish Town, Jamaica |
As a father of two beautiful sons, I have always felt that bond which you so beautifully describe. I thank you most humbly for having expressed it in such a wonderful way. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
My vote for this wonderfully expressed love bond. Love, Margherita |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
So loving... so touching... this is beautiful. *S* |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
IvyRose~ Just poignantly lovely~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Touching...fantastic writing...last two lines are my favorite...James |
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Khryannalin Junior Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 10Winnipeg, MB, Canada |
True, and touching, you have my vote. K |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ivy Rose Well done, you have my vote. |
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