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Bill Charles
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0 posted 2003-03-26 11:58 PM


“SOFT WHISPERS”
~~~~
Soft whispers I heard
under the moon,
my being filled with
the words of you,
they entered inside and
touched my heart,
another of the awakenings
to me that you do…
~~~~
Bill Charles

© Copyright 2003 Bill Charles - All Rights Reserved
ThisDiamond
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1 posted 2003-03-27 12:13 PM


Very pretty.
TD

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2 posted 2003-03-27 12:14 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, Lady Luna always loves to see lovers sing softly to one anothers heart, so may she always grace you and your loves heart with such warmth! (big hugggsssssss) This is spellbinding, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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3 posted 2003-03-27 01:06 AM


And this an awakening of its own.... thanks for it.

~~(¸¸¸¸ºº>   ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº>  ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº>    ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº>
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littlewing
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4 posted 2003-03-27 01:09 AM


Bill - and you just brought light into my night with your lovely words - this is beautiful . . . xxoo
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5 posted 2003-03-27 01:49 AM


Bill...As always your words are words expressed from a heart of love. You have such a wonderfully romantic nature and it shows in the poetry you write. Sorry, I haven't been here for awhile; but I have just found my password and I have been a little preoccupied with the war in Iraq. It's so refreshing to read your work, again.

***Ivy Rose

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6 posted 2003-03-27 02:26 AM


awwwwwww love those soft whispers under the moon

Always a pleasure to read you Bill

Charisma

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7 posted 2003-03-27 08:14 AM


Nothing is more beautiful than awakening together to love and magic ...
Enjoyed those tender whispers.
Love, Margherita

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8 posted 2003-03-27 08:18 AM


Bill, I'm glad that you can hear the soft
whispers, too...It's fun being a hopeless
romantic, isn't it? I know!!  

Heart Hugs,
Ethel

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9 posted 2003-03-27 08:54 AM


A lovely whisper Bill...
Enjoyed this morning..
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Sudhir Iyer
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10 posted 2003-03-27 10:07 AM


very romantic...

regards,
sudhir

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11 posted 2003-03-27 10:31 AM


Lovely writing, Bill.


Sunkissed.

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12 posted 2003-03-27 12:22 PM


the words of you,
they entered inside and
touched my heart,

Did you realize you were also describing the ways of your poetry? *S* This is beautiful!

Goldboat
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13 posted 2003-03-27 02:26 PM


I have translated the poem into Chinese here. If you agree, I will post it to some web sites in Chinese, such as: http://www.toppoem.com/list.asp?boardid=15  http://www.likk.com/cgi-bin/forums.cgi?forum=34  http://www.poemlife.com.cn/forum/list.jsp?forumID=6  http://www.liufangdi.com/index_2.asp  http://www2.bbsland.com/cgi-bin/tea.cgi

Thank you for your good poem.


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[This message has been edited by Goldboat (03-27-2003 02:28 PM).]

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14 posted 2003-03-27 05:04 PM



Now...you just knew
I would enjoy this read
didn't you?

        Karilea - If I whisper, will you listen?...

Robert Frazier
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15 posted 2003-03-27 05:11 PM


Bill, your a man after my own heart!

Rf

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16 posted 2003-03-27 05:17 PM


enjoyed
Suetang
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17 posted 2003-03-27 05:34 PM


Hello Bill

I always enjoy the beautiful images that appear when I read your words.  Here is a little something for you.

"In our life
there is a single color,
as on an artist's palette
which provides the
meaning of life and art.
It is the color of love."

Take care......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Bill Charles
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18 posted 2003-03-27 07:42 PM


Just wanted to thank all of you for your most generous replies to this writing.

Goldboat, I would be honored to have you post this. Please email me, or ICQ me with your thoughts...

BC

Martie
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19 posted 2003-03-27 09:34 PM


Bill...this is beautiful!  
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20 posted 2003-03-27 10:08 PM


You must realize by now that your soft whispers cause awakenings in your female readers!

Sweet dreams!
EA

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21 posted 2003-03-27 11:57 PM


Oh Bill, this is just beautiful!
Goldboat
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22 posted 2003-03-28 11:51 AM


Bill, give me your email address or email that to my address at:
fireuranus@hotmail.com

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23 posted 2003-03-28 12:00 PM


Well I've come to the conclusion that a *swooning* smiley needs to be found. For often I've needed one. This is lovely Bill.
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24 posted 2003-03-28 07:40 PM


BillCharles~
Shhhhhhhhh !
I was here ... I read ... I feel~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com                        

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