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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore 
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Like a porcelain vase smashed to bits and pieces Cotton pillows spread their dominance over the sky and my sight Like grassland swaying in the wind These sky waves surge forward Splashing over casually, they erode away impurities, leaving behind contentment Like a multi-storeyed pagoda These layered clouds leave me spell-bound open-mouthed blank-minded gasping for words to adequately describe them |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Lovely. Joyce |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Joyce, that was really quick..thanks for reading!  |
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Flower Member
since 2003-03-15
Posts 240California |
This is beautiful. Voted. Love reading all these great writes. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very very nice...much enjoyed! ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Essorant Member Elite
since 2002-08-10
Posts 4769Regina, Saskatchewan; Canada |
Enjoyed this. It is like a painting. [This message has been edited by Essorant (03-17-2003 01:37 PM).] |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Yes, Kaile...you painted a picture with words.....  "Love makes the world go around" |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
Must vote for this it's lovely. |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Very nicely written, enjoyed the read of this. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Great work, Kaile. You got my vote. All writing comes by the grace of God. -Ralph Waldo Emerson [This message has been edited by Lone Wolf (03-17-2003 09:07 PM).] |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
your work has grown much here in your time my friend. . . this shows it. . . excellent work. . . -------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Thanks for reading and the votes..muchly appreciated... Sir Sven, you reckon? you made my day with your comment! Mega thanks! |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Love it Another K...gets my vote..  K |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
I'd like to see this get a shot in the book.  A poem about trying to write a poem. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
I like this, too. Hugs, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
These layered clouds leave me spell-bound open-mouthed blank-minded gasping for words to adequately describe them all too often the words are inadequate no matter whose... but you captured here a bit of the imagery..and in unique form... I enjoyed... |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
The visual are yummy! I felt the breezy sky waves. When you think you have heard it all, |
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