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Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

0 posted 2003-03-26 04:45 PM

We lean towards the edge
of one another -

Risking the fall.

For this one clear view.

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2003-03-26 05:04 PM

yes...not sure how this one got so low on the list without a comment... nicely done and in its few words a lot contained.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2003-03-26 06:19 PM

WOW Eric! This is one huge *sigh* just waiting to happen!

~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

cinnamongirl
Member

since 2003-02-02

Posts 217

3 posted 2003-03-26 06:43 PM

And that one clear view is well worth the risk...

...and perhaps the fall wouldn't be so bad, either...

Beautiful words... profound message... as always, you are amazing.

Thank you for this wonderful poem...

Love,
Moca

[This message has been edited by cinnamongirl (03-26-2003 06:44 PM).]

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

4 posted 2003-03-26 07:13 PM

sometimes the best view is from the edge

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

5 posted 2003-03-26 11:15 PM

Ahhh but Ericc - the fall is worth the view . . . sometimes . . . this is lovely . . . xxoo

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2003-03-26 11:56 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwww, and even if you did fall from looking deep into loves eyes, you feel fine and feel as though you're falling upwards in grace! (big hugggsssssss) This is incredible, sweet friend, yippee, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

7 posted 2003-03-27 08:27 AM

Falling .... into LOVE's clearest manifestation ....
So beautiful ..... I dare to risk for a close look.
Love, Margherita

Sunkissed
Senior Member

since 2002-12-03

Posts 610

8 posted 2003-03-27 10:24 AM

Enjoyed this fragrant whisper.

Sunkissed.

SimplyGold
Senior Member

since 2002-07-10

Posts 1453

9 posted 2003-04-01 06:01 PM

Ericc, I'm taken by your poetry. Bravo, just discovered you. Looking for more.

SG

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

10 posted 2003-04-01 06:19 PM

l.
2.
3.
close your eyes, and
jump!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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