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Open Poetry #25

Lest I Dare Forget

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

0 posted 2003-03-26 03:50 PM

                   I remember your embrace
                   like a fading memory
                   a picture in our crumbling
                   photo album

                   I'll never forget
                   your sweet lips
                   intoxicating as sweet wine
                   brushing against mine
                   on many a starlit night

                   How can I dare forget
                   a thousand night
                   ignited by our flames
                   of passion
                   which now grow cold

                   I dare not forget our love
                   for its memory
                   may soon be all I hold
                   in these trembling hands.

[This message has been edited by Brad Majors (03-26-2003 03:51 PM).]

Ringo

Member Elite

since 2003-02-20

Posts 3684
Saluting with misty eyes

1 posted 2003-03-26 04:38 PM

Great job... sometimes remembering is the best part.

Imagine all the People living life in peace...
John Lennon

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

2 posted 2003-03-26 04:47 PM

thank you!

Robert Frazier
Senior Member

since 2003-02-06

Posts 1014

3 posted 2003-03-26 04:58 PM

...out of the flames, poet!

Rf

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2003-03-26 05:57 PM

Excellent...James

Sunkissed
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since 2002-12-03

Posts 610

5 posted 2003-03-27 11:01 AM

Sometimes memories are best.

Enjoyed.

Sunkissed.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

6 posted 2003-03-27 08:11 PM

Goodness Brad - I know this too well - awesome write - xxoo

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

7 posted 2003-03-28 08:09 AM

Beautiful ..... new lips may be waiting somewhere, anxious to create new memory for the future.
Love eternal!
Love, Margherita

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

8 posted 2003-03-28 08:16 AM

Brad,
Well done, looks like your getting some good advice.

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