Open Poetry #25 |
Silence can be Bold |
Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) |
Silence can be Bold That is the statement that you make so strong it causes heartache No answer to my questions only empty sound and its getting louder and longer by the day Where could you be to keep me waiting in doubt what tasks are you laden with that might distract me from your thoughts? Echoes resound building into a thunder my own voice bounces back in the space left from our past conversations that grow less in depth Shhhhhh can your ears hear it the void that crashes like surf on the beach silence can be bold it is the unspoken answer to my questions asked Is this regular or Decaf? [This message has been edited by Thomas119gold (03-26-2003 08:40 PM).] |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Very cool piece |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Sounds like Decaf... it always leaves me in pain.. strong write... and heartfelt |
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