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Open Poetry #25

Excusing My Invent

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2003-03-26 08:29 AM

Excusing My Invent

Yesterday I looked for you
in silence of the green.
My insides reached their outside point
and wrestled with the seen.

Matching word for word my thoughts
of vision's yesterday,
I struggled with tomorrow's need
observing on my way.

Nodded here, and sometimes there
stepping on intent,
I smiled with pleasure, memories served,
excusing my invent.

For mind of mine can reach inside,
pull up imagine's wear.
And promise me a day of full
creating what's not there.

Confident and comfort born
on Wednesday, this midweek,
I watch in silence for a sign
of warmth, a "preview sneak".

To garnish me, embellished with
the wearing words of more,
I am still me, the one "who is",
the one you loved before.

M
*having some word fun this morning *s

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

1 posted 2003-03-26 09:51 AM

"To garnish me, embellished with
the wearing words of more,
I am still me, the one "who is",
the one you loved before."

I really enjoyed this, especially the words above.

Susan

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

2 posted 2003-03-26 10:27 AM

nicely done!

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