Heart Dance.....................yet another rictameter

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

0 posted 2003-03-25 10:16 PM

~~~~
Our song
From you and I
So very clearly heard
As our hearts together sway
Dancing to loves song, whether night or day
Under moonlight at still of night
Or the beach in daylight
Our two hearts hear
Our song
~~~~

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (03-26-2003 12:48 AM).]

WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

1 posted 2003-03-25 10:17 PM

Ethel, and yet another lovely write.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2003-03-25 10:18 PM

(smiles) Yay! Oh Ethel, I hope soon and Gary are together forever and get to walk on the beach hand in hand forever, I long to take my loves hand for the first time, this is breathtaking, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2003-03-25 10:22 PM

YES!! Another beautiful write Ethel!!
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

4 posted 2003-03-25 10:31 PM

garysgirl - a ricktometer or earthquake happening, this is just lovely, absolutely delovely lovely. m'''mmmmm, uh, m'mmm, yuh, m'mmmmm....

BC

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

5 posted 2003-03-25 10:52 PM

Anne,
Thanks, friend!!

.
.
Noah,
yeah, me too. Thank you, my
friend!!

.
.
Nancy Lee,
Thank you, too, friend!!

.
.
Bill,
LOL...that sounded like
some strums on your guitar. Right?
Thank you, my friend!!
.
.
Heart Hugs to you all

Ethel

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

6 posted 2003-03-25 10:53 PM

Nice write...
Very emotive and soft...like love.
ThisDiamond

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

7 posted 2003-03-25 10:56 PM

Well now you know a technical form! Great job...

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

8 posted 2003-03-25 11:08 PM

Kathleen, thank you, sweet lady

.
.
Duncan, LOL Yep, I finally
learned something...I think??

.
.
I appreciate you both.
Heart Hugs to ya'll

Ethel

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

9 posted 2003-03-25 11:25 PM

Ethel - I dont know how you pack so much emotion into so few words but these are beautiful - have you considered just doing a book of these? Love this xxoo

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

10 posted 2003-03-26 12:43 PM

Sue, what a nice thing to say. Thank
you for that. I appreciate it.

Heart Hugs,
Ethel

rosepetals25

Member Elite

since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

11 posted 2003-03-26 10:52 AM

Aren't rictameters fun to do? LOL Like you, usually once I start I go on a binge of them.. same with haike and tankas *chuckles*

You do them very well

I'm glad I stopped to read!

Tara

"in my field of paper flowers
and candy clouds of lullaby
i lie inside myself for hours
and watch my purple sky fly over me"
- Imaginary by Evanes

Thomas119gold
Senior Member

since 2002-06-03

Posts 708
Biloxi, MS (city by the sea)

12 posted 2003-03-26 11:00 AM

Nice

I enjoyed and hope to read more soon
as you know I am one who falls easily for Romantic poetry

Thomas

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

13 posted 2003-03-26 11:03 AM

Ethel,
Well done, enjoyed.

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

14 posted 2003-03-26 04:38 PM

And such a beautiful song you invoke.
Eric

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

15 posted 2003-03-26 07:08 PM

Ethel, you do these so well. This is just beautiful.

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

16 posted 2003-03-26 07:21 PM

Ethel,

Like the title so much.

"Heart Dance", original thought, I don't believe I heard that expression before. You do have this form down very well. Good for you. Enjoyed,

Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

17 posted 2003-03-26 07:25 PM

How do you do that?
It's just lovely
I learn from your writing
THank you for teaching
Liz

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

18 posted 2003-03-26 09:28 PM

enjoyed it a lot

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

19 posted 2003-03-27 11:47 AM

So very lovely! *S*

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

20 posted 2003-03-27 11:54 AM

And thank you, Dear Ether, for "yet another rictameter"! I am really enjoying reading these!

Love & Light,
Linda

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.