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TWENTY OR LESS...#113
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
TWENTY OR LESS...#113 Copyright 2003 by: MARK V SHELDON Shadows flare over sombre sky morning's chilling dark burns solipsistic whisper drowns my omniscient cry reflecting in phantasmagoric stare You CAN make a difference: |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
solipsistic whisper drowns my omniscient cry reflecting in phantasmagoric stare now my friend..you challenge the images with the hint of surreal and strengthen the tone.in concise use and placement of word.. very well done... and speaking of style... this one has certainly suited you well. You mastery of the short and concise... I now envy. |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Ron... a compliment of the highest order, coming from one of my favorite poets! Thank you, Sir! -MVS You CAN make a difference: |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Not one word wasted as usual. So very well said Mark. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
A phantasmagoric write, Mark...very well done.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
MARK, A wring of polished stones sparkling with fantasy, enjoyed. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
MARK - this is truly stunning, should have been for the book in my opinion... BC |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Mark, I too always find something strangely comforting about walking beisde the water in the early morning or after the sun goes down, dearest friend, love this wonderful portrayal, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Mark, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Nancy... efficiency is intriguing. Thank you, as always. scorpio: much obliged. Sy, that's a unique description -- I like it. Thank you, Sir. Bill, that's a mighty fine compliment, and I thank you for it, but these are more like "thoughts of the day" for me... Noah: ...water...? Interesting take. I guess as long as one respects the water and knows one's limitations then everything will be ok... Thank you, friend... -MVS You CAN make a difference: |
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