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Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

0 posted 2003-03-25 09:05 AM

I read aloud the words penned
In remembrance of a dream

“Be of great care with this heart
for it has known gash and tear
that though not healed are held
in check by brittle thread,
to stop a bleed of want
the hemorrhage of Fear”

and in pause… no more to read
for those lines followed by others
told only of another slash ,
I swore

A raised fist holds no hand but its own
And I knew those fingers curled
In the palm of mine

Knew alone.

MARK V SHELDON
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

1 posted 2003-03-25 09:13 AM

Powerful in a style all your own, Ron...

You CAN make a difference:
http://educate-yourself.org/

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

2 posted 2003-03-25 09:15 AM

Morning Mark..lol.. a style all my own..yeah... but not one I neccessarily am proud of.. but hey..simple people have simple ways...

thank you for the words and the read...
they are appreciated

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2003-03-25 09:18 AM

..."A raised fist holds no hand but its own."---Amen

You are a poet of merit...

Peace & Love,
EA

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2003-03-25 09:19 AM

..speechless.
Powerful write Ron.
Another keeper.
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

5 posted 2003-03-25 09:31 AM

"to stop a bleed of want
the hemorrhage of Fear”

Funny how want bleeds less than fear...if it were the other way around wouldn't we accomplish so much more?

Beautiful.

Susan

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

6 posted 2003-03-25 11:41 AM

Gee...this is deep. I can come up with a couple scenarios that this would fit it. I find pain and courage in it, and a smoldering rage.

Simple my foot! But humble as can possibly be....

Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

7 posted 2003-03-25 09:11 PM

'I read aloud the words penned
In remembrance of a dream

“Be of great care with this heart
for it has known gash and tear
that though not healed are held
in check by brittle thread,
to stop a bleed of want
the hemorrhage of Fear”'

All I can say is...amen.

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

8 posted 2003-03-25 09:17 PM

Ron...Seems like your poetry is moving into another level...a good one of search and survival. Hugs!

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

9 posted 2003-03-25 10:05 PM

(big hugggssssssss) Oh Ron, I can relate to this heartfelt plea ever so much, dearest friend, I have dealt with too much hemorrhage in my life with no tourniquet to sustain my losses and I long to be loved and to hold a loves hand for the first time! (sad sigh) So I continue to pray, this is wonderfully written, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ron, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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