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the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA

0 posted 2003-03-23 10:39 PM


If the world crashes down
I won't go down
With a frown
Because I have found
Love
And that completes
Everything in this life

If the world crashes down
I won't be alone
I will be with the one
That I truly love
And we will be holding each other
Until it is all over

If the world crashes down
Our love
Shall never die
But go on
Enduring
For time indefinite

Cold hands means a warm heart

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Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
1 posted 2003-03-23 10:41 PM


Julie...love is all that matters..
love conquers all.
Excellent write...your writing is growing in leaps and bounds.
Well done.
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Jason Lyle
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since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438
With my darkling
2 posted 2003-03-23 10:45 PM


I am so glad you have someone like this.Nice words, hard times.
Jason

ThunderMage
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since 2002-06-20
Posts 812
Canada
3 posted 2003-03-24 01:33 AM


Nothing can beat our love Julie.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!
We do not stop playing because we grow ol

Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637
Escondido-California
4 posted 2003-03-25 10:35 PM


Hi Julie,

This feels so wonderful and you are blessed, enjoyed so much.

Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)



Mistletoe Angel
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5 posted 2003-03-25 11:52 PM




(big hugggsssssss) And all true love can never die, no nuclear bomb or meteor can ever break the diamond core of a lovers smile! (sigh) Now if I can just find this kind of love, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Ringo
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Saluting with misty eyes
6 posted 2003-03-26 12:04 PM


A love this good grows more in the telling...
Another fine job.

Imagine all the People living life in peace...
John Lennon

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
7 posted 2003-03-26 12:30 PM


the_loner_23 - I have seen you write from sad to love, best to you...

BC

rosepetals25
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8 posted 2003-03-26 10:51 AM


Awwww

Tara

"in my field of paper flowers
and candy clouds of lullaby
i lie inside myself for hours
and watch my purple sky fly over me"
- Imaginary by Evanes

vandana
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USA
9 posted 2003-03-26 09:38 PM


enjoyed
Marge Tindal
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Florida's Foreverly Shores
10 posted 2003-03-26 10:03 PM


Julie~
*smiles* and *hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com                        

Ratleader
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11 posted 2003-03-27 01:25 AM


And that is what really matters, isn't it? To love, to be loved, to have been loved.

You say it so well, and Ratleader continues to find pleasure in watching you grow....

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______________Ratleader______________

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