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Open Poetry #25

Fingertips To Dine

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2003-03-23 07:34 PM

My darling,
Said as clear as mountain streams
It is for you my windswept spirit dreams
In visions free to feel the hearty lines
And each artistic sculpture sleek defines

Thoughts in stir that bubble up my spine
In quivered eager of my fingertips to dine
Ever bright and good the tremble of this love
Said clear as breaking day these thoughts are of

In the magic of a tranquil afternoon
Might I lie into your arms in silk cocoon
Without a word, as only touches term expressed
These vivid dreams that do remain a fire repressed

My darling,
You remain the deepest rain filled pools
Heavenly and happily in drink my fever cools
Brought about across a space that chasms all
Said this clearly every breath to rise and fall

Copyright Kkh 3/23/03

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

1 posted 2003-03-23 07:49 PM

Kathleen, this is so beautiful
and romantic. You know this
hopeless romantic loves it.

"Love makes the world go around"
~with love and hugs from Ethel__GG~

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

2 posted 2003-03-23 07:51 PM

My darling,
Said as clear as mountain streams
It is for you my windswept spirit dreams
In visions free to feel the hearty lines
And each artistic sculpture sleek defines

Love the way you romance the written words.
You are so well versed TD~

Hmmmmmmmmmm~ yes!

Miah
Senior Member

since 2002-08-26

Posts 1062
Pennsylvania

3 posted 2003-03-23 09:52 PM

How wonderful this is! I'm not sure which verse I like the best! Your words wrap me like a blanket.

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