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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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MoonMazed I cased the moon and watched its where, the shadows blending it with blue. Each night the fullness overtakes and I, I am amazed in view. A Moonchild, yes, that's what I'm called with feelings tender, emotions fledged. For each and every phase that shows I rise in flight from here, where edged. And don't you know I'm caught in time bordered on the dividing line. Wondering, wandering in between, just a fledgling on the scene. I'm learning always, in heart degrees the ins and outs of skillfull gain, and yet I sometimes rearrange the winning hand so you can reign. I'm lost in thought imagining you, building daydreams in the haze. The grayness really scares-me-not for often I can feel your gaze. You can't escape me, nor the moon for we are children phased in glow. Eclipsed at times in gloom of night entangled we, in shadow's know. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Wow...this is wonderful beautiful! Eric |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you Eric, I use to go by the name MMoonchild..so I often write with it in mind. M |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Maureen, this is really beautiful. I love the moon and I love your poetry. A wonderful combination.  Heart Hugs, Ethel |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I've often thought how you fit all of your names so very well... an exceptional write, Maureen... beautiful! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
nakd - I love this! and the moon - ahhh - I live for the night . . . this one hit me good - xxoo |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Perhaps we could walk in moon glow together some night and share our poetic thoughts...  Love & Peace, EA |
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zenny Member
since 2002-11-24
Posts 371Belgium |
very nice poem i love the moon myself too; i often look at it, with it's special glow and glory up there in the sky Hugs, kelly |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MsWynter~ And you KNEW I'd love it~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
I like your melancholy moon thoughts When you think you have heard it all, |
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pearl6884 Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 72California coast |
So beautiful...*tears* *Speechless* Thank you! *applause* *To see the world in a grain of sand, and heaven in a wild flower...Hold infinity in the palm of your hand and eternity in an hour...* |
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