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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2003-03-23 01:29 PM

MoonMazed

I cased the moon and watched its where,
the shadows blending it with blue.
Each night the fullness overtakes
and I, I am amazed in view.

A Moonchild, yes, that's what I'm called
with feelings tender, emotions fledged.
For each and every phase that shows
I rise in flight from here, where edged.

And don't you know I'm caught in time
bordered on the dividing line.
Wondering, wandering in between,
just a fledgling on the scene.

I'm learning always, in heart degrees
the ins and outs of skillfull gain,
and yet I sometimes rearrange
the winning hand so you can reign.

I'm lost in thought imagining you,
building daydreams in the haze.
The grayness really scares-me-not
for often I can feel your gaze.

You can't escape me, nor the moon
for we are children phased in glow.
Eclipsed at times in gloom of night
entangled we, in shadow's know.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

1 posted 2003-03-23 01:34 PM

Wow...this is wonderful beautiful!
Eric

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2003-03-23 01:43 PM

Thank you Eric, I use to go by the name MMoonchild..so I often write with it in mind.

M

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

3 posted 2003-03-23 02:34 PM

Maureen, this is really beautiful.
I love the moon and I love your poetry.
A wonderful combination.

Heart Hugs,
Ethel

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2003-03-23 03:33 PM

I've often thought
how you fit all of your names
so very well...

an exceptional write, Maureen...
beautiful!

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

5 posted 2003-03-24 05:11 AM

nakd - I love this! and the moon - ahhh - I live for the night . . . this one hit me good - xxoo

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

6 posted 2003-03-24 08:49 AM

Perhaps we could walk in moon glow together some night and share our poetic thoughts...

Love & Peace,
EA

zenny
Member

since 2002-11-24

Posts 371
Belgium

7 posted 2003-03-24 09:36 AM

very nice poem

i love the moon myself too; i often look at it, with it's special glow and glory up there in the sky

Hugs, kelly

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

8 posted 2003-03-24 09:44 AM

MsWynter~
And you KNEW I'd love it~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

9 posted 2003-03-24 05:40 PM

nice

Chanson
Senior Member

since 2000-08-19

Posts 1559
Up Creek w/Out Paddle

10 posted 2003-03-25 01:37 PM

I like your melancholy moon thoughts

When you think you have heard it all,
listen more closely.
~Dorene

pearl6884
Member

since 2003-03-23

Posts 72
California coast

11 posted 2003-03-25 01:40 PM

So beautiful...*tears* *Speechless* Thank you! *applause*

*To see the world in a grain of sand, and heaven in a wild flower...Hold infinity in the palm of your hand and eternity in an hour...*
-Blake

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