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Mine Self But True ( A Sonnet)
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Mine Self But True ( A Sonnet) |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York 
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Behold, thine Heavens do speak this morn On weathered wind for all to hear Questioning heart mine hath been torn Music doth fall upon deaf ear Most times the tender heart does beat In thunderous tune with One above It is this tune we all repeat An endless journey I once did love Eternal beauty eyes once did see Reflected in mine self but true Resting in tranquility Savored thus and kept for you In this world I spend my life Murderous existence of haste and strife |
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dreambuilder Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 319caddyshack |
the dual imagery is awesome my first impression is God then it could also be a lover excellent write |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
This is beautiful! Eric |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Murderous existence ...hmmm..a surprised ending... M |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
I too, felt a duality in for whom the message was intended. The last line does suggest a ever present angst. But your thoughts are always worth reading. KJ Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Sue, there seems to be peace and turmoil in this one. Hope you're okay?  Heart Hugs,  Ethel |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
of One .... thy self prevails through accepting peace and war endless tides of filling sails and wanting thy heart to soar not in pain ... nor illness nor tortured souls of unrest but eternal fulfillness this, the forgiven at best Be true ... to hearts content never waiver in self doubt the journey your Fate has meant other's hate knows not about there is only one to be ... and that is the one called ME [This message has been edited by ctowen (03-23-2003 03:14 PM).] |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Love this don't change a single word |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Dream - TY so much - was going for that edge - glad you saw it Ericc - TY - always nice from you nakd - hehehe always a surprise ending TY KJ - yes - and this: for whom this is intended - they see but they dont see - if you know what I mean TY Ethel - you are so sweet - I am OK - I just write dark - seems to flow easier xxoo C - looks like you got yourself a nice sonnet there yourself - what an awesome reply! TY Raph - never . . . and . . . thank you xxoo |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
im always true to myself, even that inkedchick , gotta love her, tho she pisses some off.........shes my lifeline, while michele stays chained, |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
goodness Michele - why do you think I have these wings in here . . . and yes - inked or not you inspire me with your strength TY xxoo |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
Sue... You always seem to bring the best imagry possible t the forum. This was very nicely done, and would have gotten my vote had you chosen to include it. ~You might say I'm a Dreamer, but I'm not the only one... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Dear littlewing, you do walk in the Light, but shadows can blot out the sun from time to time... You are a wonderful writer! Peace, Love & Light, EA |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I love this! good write! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Ringo - thank you - was my first attempt here - made me feel good EA - yes just wish moreso the light . . . shadows - my friend - thank you so much xxoo |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Sue This was such a powerful write and so much enjoyed by me. Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
littlewing - many thoughts in this write... \BC |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Thank you Sue & Bill - yes many thoughts indeed . . . always good to see you both reading me xxoo |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Very nicely said. Sandra |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Thank you Catalina xxoo |
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