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A Little Goofy
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A Little Goofy |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“A LITTLE GOOFY” by Bill Charles ~~~~ Getting a little goofy I am, not quite sure I know why, could it be something extra, you put in the apple pie… It did taste especially good, not like it was bad, or nuttin, but I is getting a little goofy, it must be,’ hic’, because of sumtin… Maybe the rum I saw you with, when you poured in a little bit, a’hh, you thought I wasn’t looking, wonder if you’re trying to get me lit… Wow, I’m getting a little dizzy, what was in that pie I wonder, and I forgot we were all alone, where’s that bed I ponder… hic… ~~~~ |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Oh Bill, I can't tell you how much this made me giggle. Simply a delight, this is. Thanks so much for this light-hearted fare.  |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Do tell, was it the rum or the apple pie, and was it as good for you? ...hic, hehe, pardon me... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I love your wit and whimsy side of writing as well as your dashing and romantic side. Mixes things up and makes things interesting!  Peace & Love, EA |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Bill, this is a beautiful poem, with lots of hidden truths...   "Love makes the world go around" |
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dreambuilder Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 319caddyshack |
that was great thank - you so much I needed that laugh |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh Bill, thanks for the laugh. You had me thinking of the old classic, "Arsenic & Old Lace"...and I couldn't help but grin! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Oh Bill, thank you for the Sunday morning giggles ....this is great! And I am also learning "sumtin"! There is so much lovely intimacy in these lines. Love, Margherita |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
*hic* thanks for sharing this funny one...enjoyed it very much *s* Charisma |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
I'll bet you grinned the whole time writing this. Perhaps you know the story of the woman who made her man pour all his whiskey down the drain, except for one little drank, which he sinked. Enjoyed a lot. Ken J Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Tickle me will ya again! I love it. This is different from what I have read of yours in the past. I like this refreshing side of your writing. This is a great time for some levity. Sg |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Bill...I love this side of your pen! Thanks so much for the smile...I needed one today.  |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Hehehe, maybe that pie had just way too much sugar in it, or the apples were Washington apples! (big huggggsssssss) This is so delightful, sweet friend, hehehe, love this side of you, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Bill hahahahaha - what has happened in the last several days hehehehe - loved this xxoo - |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
"hic!" lol gotta love that! I needed this smile today, thanks so much!!  I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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