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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 2003-03-22 02:05 PM




The Solstice Song
By: Noah Eaton
3/21/03

Fires of the heavens
Blend in the wings of a yellow-throated sparrow
Backstroking in reverse through a misty morning rain
Where the meadowlark waddles in the fountains
Bubble bathing in epiphanies, promises, blessings, and estuaries
Marauding the dusk for pearls for young souls

Manzanilla rain plays the leaves in glockenspiel
Lawn gnomes wear their maquillage
And wear the lilacs for the inaugural tea party

Shine in the solstice
Soothsay all you want but there is only one soothsayer
Shine in the solstice
Tear away the tarpaulin and summon the kaleidoscope waiter
With symbols more deep than Braille
Worn around you like phylacteries
You alone are the solstice minister…



Caught free will
Through a daffodil
As she sung in her flowerbed
An epic quodlibet
Washed over by a vinaigrette of cotton rain
So I offer my salaam
And filled my pockets with saffron
To nurture the empire in my garden
Paying my tributary
Testing my trial balloon to this illustrious day

Provided is room and board through the hours
With the Rose of Sharon this day is ours
And we’ll catch the captain’s choice in purse seine…

Shine in the solstice
Soothsay all you want but there is only one soothsayer
Shine in the solstice
Tear away the tarpaulin and summon the kaleidoscope waiter
You are a brother in-law of the sun
A sister in-law of the moon
You are a sibling of the summer…



Take the birds and the bees, wear them like a hug-me-tight
The morning mist is your humeral veil
Let the waterfall grace you like a Humboldt current
Care to share some raspberry cobbler with the nightingales?

Fires of the heavens
Blend in the wings of a yellow-throated sparrow
Soaring against a Hinayanistic April rainbow
Where a lumberjack is caught in a Dolly Varden
Swinging at the darkness to let the sunbeam trespass
Where Blue-Eyed Mary wears dolman sleeves
And the pimpernel wears high heels and emerald scarves



All this time Mother still follows demagoguery
So blow a kiss to her majesty
And wear her lilacs for her inaugural tea party

Shine in the solstice
Soothsay all you want but there is only one soothsayer
Shine in the solstice
Tear away the tarpaulin and summon the kaleidoscope waiter
You are a brother in-law of the sun
A sister in-law of the moon
You are a sibling of the summer…

Come, my child…
I’ll show you colors you’ve never seen
I’ll show you a moon ever so debonair
I’ll show you the spring…






"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira


[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (03-22-2003 02:11 PM).]

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1 posted 2003-03-22 02:11 PM


DANG! This is a brilliant write Noah, ALl the pix are great, 'cept the final one for me is just that stupid little red box!

I'm keeping this one, forever.

Happy Spring to you.

May ripples of LOVE
become waves of PEACE

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2 posted 2003-03-22 02:18 PM


Joyful Angel flitting about with fluttering wings...

May I join you in your sweet, solstice song! Everything about your glorious post makes me want to sing and dance and frolick about!

Peace & Love,
Linda

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3 posted 2003-03-22 02:24 PM


Thanks! The last photo is great too!
Noah, I've saved this one pix and all on my hard drive, in case some little cyber ghost should try to capture it and make it disappear.

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4 posted 2003-03-22 02:28 PM


beautiful song,
in this present state of world, how nice of her to grace us and put her blind faith into us again

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5 posted 2003-03-22 02:34 PM


Noah, I love this. Gosh, you have raised my spiritds and make me feel like I can fly. And the pictures are beautiful....

All this time Mother still follows demagoguery
So blow a kiss to her majesty
And wear her lilacs for her inaugural tea party


Fabulous .... huggles, Marti

Few are those who see with their own eyes and feel with their own hearts.  A.Einstein

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6 posted 2003-03-22 02:50 PM


Noah, as always, a lovely rendition. And the pictures go so well. Spring in my heart.
Sandra

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7 posted 2003-03-23 10:14 PM


Beautifully said poem my friend. I like the way you described the coming of spring.

Cold hands means a warm heart

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8 posted 2003-03-23 10:51 PM


Noah, sorry I'm so late reading this.
It's absolutely breathtaking. It's so
beautiful.

Do you do the artwork yourself? It's so pretty.  

"Love makes the world go around"
~with love and hugs from Ethel__GG~  
                  

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9 posted 2003-03-24 12:33 PM


this is just amazing sweet friend....I can hear the harmony well....



L~

I close my eyes and there in the shadows I see your light
You come to me out of my dreams
Across the night

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10 posted 2003-03-24 12:38 PM


Great imagery, great pics, just a great write.
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11 posted 2003-03-24 12:48 PM


Noah - this is just beautiful - as always - here - my friend you are singing in the Solstice - truly xxoo

With the Rose of Sharon this day is ours
And we’ll catch the captain’s choice in purse seine…



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12 posted 2003-03-24 01:50 PM


.... wonderful ..... I inhale the lilac's fragrance and listen to the glockenspiel and sing along ....
Thank you!
Love, Margherita

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13 posted 2003-03-24 05:38 PM


lovely
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