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garysgirl
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0 posted 2003-03-21 08:29 PM


~**~
Feelings
And emotions
When coming from the heart
Should be handled with tender care
Being careful to not cause someone pain
Or long-lasting hurtful heartaches
Causing the person scars
With slow healing
Feelings
~**~



© Copyright 2003 Ethel GG Kent - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-03-21 08:32 PM


This is so prettily presented, I could see it cross-stitched and framed.

Sometimes truth is simple.

Love ya ethel.

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2 posted 2003-03-21 08:35 PM


Beautiful Ethel...
I agree with Serenity..
would be beautiful in a cross stitch.
~Hugs~

~ I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before ~

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3 posted 2003-03-21 08:47 PM




(smiles) Yay! Oh Ethel, this is lovely, sweet friend, I think you should start weaving a family quilt and every special memory can always be added to it, yay! (kiss on cheek) This is delightful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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4 posted 2003-03-21 09:01 PM


Karen,
That's so sweet of you to say.
I love to cross stitch, too.
And, yeah, sometimes truth is
simple, isn't it? Thanks, friend.  
.
.
Nancy lee,
Thank you very much. That is a good
idea, and like I said, I love to
cross stitch, too.
.
.
Noah,
thank you. My late husband's Mother
and sister used to make quilts all
the time. They are so pretty.  
.
.
I really appreciate all of you.
Heart Hugs,
Ethel

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5 posted 2003-03-21 10:22 PM


A beautiful message!
Eric

SmartChick
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6 posted 2003-03-21 10:24 PM


Ethel, this is so beautiful. And, true.
Lisann
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7 posted 2003-03-21 10:47 PM


its too bad that we dont have the ability to take back things that we've said or done.   Words can be incredibly painful.........or incredibly beautiful.   It really is too bad that the painful ones seem to last longer.  Great job on the write.
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8 posted 2003-03-21 10:50 PM


Wow, this was really well said. Great job. This is a heart felt poem and an enjoyable read. Keep it up!
WhiteRose
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9 posted 2003-03-21 10:51 PM


Ethel,

I was thinking the same as Serenity, it would be lovely embroidered and framed. A splendid poem, and presentation.

kayjay
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10 posted 2003-03-21 11:43 PM


You are on such a role with these rictameters.  I love them....and the sentiments you offer.  This one is so true.  Ken

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

Bill Charles
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11 posted 2003-03-22 12:36 PM


garysgirl - I see you know this well my friend, I'm knowing it also...

BC

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12 posted 2003-03-22 12:41 PM


Your balanced form goes well with the message that heartfelt feelings should be balanced with deference to the feelings of others as well.  A very complete presentation in form and content.  Well done.
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13 posted 2003-03-22 06:09 AM


Have to agree with this...James
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14 posted 2003-03-22 10:42 AM


My goodness, Dear Ethel--you certainly are whipping up a wild and wonderful whirlwind of poetic pearls!

Peace & Love,
Linda

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15 posted 2003-03-22 07:55 PM


enjoyed
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16 posted 2003-03-22 08:20 PM


I haven't read any poetry for a while. This was a great break from my little "vacation" Thanks, Ethel

         Lov ya

~wind~

I look and I listen, does not everyone?

-Diane lee Wilson

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17 posted 2003-03-24 04:11 AM


Ethel - my goodness - what a heart you have - a heart for us all - you know - I do believe you are the heart of this place - truly - and that up there - just proves it.

Lovely - yes I px more like stenciled above my doorway . . .

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