Open Poetry #25 |
Cold times at home |
Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) |
Cold that is what I was feeling a chill running across my flesh as you spoke those words to me Freezing me there in shock I would never have guessed the emotions hiding inside shaking begins at my soul trembling to my bones I try to speak to you but it is as if no one is home I stand here in this frozen space wondering What went wrong? Where is the love that was supposed to stay strong? No warmth just frigid temperatures as they drop leaving me to wonder if its time to fly south because winter has come to this house |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
It always comes as such a shock. Then with me? I just get angry at myself for even being surprised that I'm surprised... Yes, it's COLD...and a frozen moment in time. I do hope this wasn't from experience, my friend. Be well. |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
A chilling write Rogue, I too hope not from experience. Sending warm thoughts your way. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) This is such a heartfelt write, sweet friend, I send angel hugs your way and hope this no longer applies to you! (sigh) Well-said, dearest friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Thomas, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Thomas - been there . . . this one hurt xxoo |
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Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) |
Sorry about the chills Found a picture that brought back memories had to write it. |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Brrrrrrr....Very sad but well written write!!!! Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very sad to me...but i like this |
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