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KoKo
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since 2003-02-15
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Inside the shadow's shadow

0 posted 2003-03-21 05:57 PM


Burnt pictures and images
Lay scattered across my mind's dusty floor.
No one's been in there for years,
Not even I.
Who would dare to walk into a haunted house
Such as this one?
Not I, said the little red hen.

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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2003-03-21 06:25 PM


Impressive!
Margherita

KoKo
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since 2003-02-15
Posts 995
Inside the shadow's shadow
2 posted 2003-03-21 06:28 PM


lol thanks!

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2003-03-22 04:57 AM


Like this...James
KoKo
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since 2003-02-15
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Inside the shadow's shadow
4 posted 2003-03-22 09:07 AM


Thanks James

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

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