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Faux Epiphany
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Faux Epiphany |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia 
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Twisting backwards Seeing life Flash forward To black Digging deep inside The pink void Looking for answers For questions Never asked Seeking tainted wisdom From weatherworn Crucifixes Seeing statues cry Plastic tears For that moment I am whole Peace drowns me Cradling Hasbro's' new Kung fu grip Jesus |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Don't be scared its just me  |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Very Interesting piece Filled with bits of brilliance Especially like the statue cry part Gloom |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I started to highlight favorite lines then realized I'd copied the entire poem. PG is right, bits of brilliance--touches of creationism and indoctination and the inner war for truth. Wow...hope that's what ya meant anyway! giggle.. Enjoyed. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
sometimes its just as is..no questions, no answers |
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Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) |
I want a Jesus with the Kung fu grip Daddy LOL Cool right Thomas |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
thank you |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Brad - I agree with K up there but this one made me grin: Peace drowns me Cradling Hasbro's' new Kung fu grip Jesus what has happened to this place? nice write xxoo |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
great piece |
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