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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York 
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You will be a healer one day . . . clickety clack . . . humble response and this from a woman of wisdom heart twirling rainbow pinwheel the kind you buy for fifty cents at a second hand store smooth round coins metallic two of them to be exact candy to a kid in those days I believed her a mere shadow in her presence chuckling . . . my fingers speaking for me click clack . . . without reaching in I believed her stopping only to breathe sweet lilac spreading in second season wooly silken lining warming hands cold hands these days . . . I looked again today hoping to sneak a glint from corner of eye shutting them instead and believing her still . . . [This message has been edited by littlewing (03-21-2003 12:17 PM).] |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
youre a mother, youre a healer you can be anything you set ur mind too......eninem........god i love that guy [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (03-21-2003 06:54 AM).] |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
heart twirling rainbow pinwheel the kind you buy for fifty cents at a second hand store love the powerfully woven image in the above section...great read! Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
"I believed her a mere shadow in her presence chuckling . . . my fingers speaking for me click clack . . ." "shutting them instead and believing her still . . ." Click, Click, Click, Click....Gesture drawings...One after another...Fitting together like a child's puzzle... Have you found a new voice? |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Michele - thank you - that means a whole lot more to me than you know Vas - my favorite part too TY Ed - hehehe - can ya tell who I've been talkin to? And no - not a new voice - just a different twist . . . TY guys xxoo [This message has been edited by littlewing (03-22-2003 12:56 AM).] |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
This is just lovely, a wonderful write.  and I love your pic, you are stunning. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Full of sights and sounds and smells... a veritable feast for the reader.  Love and Peace, EA |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
What an exceptional talent! This was astounding in it's depth, and beauty... Oh...never stop writing my friend!! ThisDiamond |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Rose - thank you - goodness what a lovely thing to say - made me smile TY EA - thanks - tried a diff twist - not sure its me Diamond wow - I thought this one was a sleeper too - thank you so much xxoo [This message has been edited by littlewing (03-22-2003 11:24 AM).] |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
This reaches deep into the pockets that are filled over time with life's lessons. Insightful stuff little birdie~ |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Your pockets are so full! wings suit you well |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Sue So many wonderful images here. I really enjoyed the read. Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Hmmm I wonder who you're talking about here? grin Nice to see a meeting of the minds |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
I absolutely love this! adding to my library. enjoyed..littlewing.. thank you. Maree  |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Blues - little birdie - I like that TY Midnite - you are too sweet - I love angels - thank you Sue - now there you are again smiling for me lol - TY Raph - thanks sweety - meeting of the minds how sweet - yes - just a diff mind lol xxoo Maree - goodness - thank you so much! Thanks guys xxoo |
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