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Silver_Tryst
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since 2003-03-10
Posts 64
MT

0 posted 2003-03-20 11:19 PM


This is for my girlfriend melissa, i cant see her right now....its tough for the both of us...but we believe in eachother, and the the important things in life you must fight and sacrifice for, but good can come along the way, good and understanding.....

When I lay and think, in my bed at night,
the day you'll arrive, seems nowhere in sight.
I toss and I turn, dreaming of you,
opening my eye's... checking if my dreams come true.
It didn't, again, and a tear starts to roll,
weeping quietly... only my pillow to hold.
Many sleepless nights I've prayed for my love.
God touched my soul from heaven above
He's answered my prayers for my bride to be.
I've never felt this lucky, God did this for me.
but why didnt he send me an angel that night?
Another night to wait, i cant hold you tight.
But no other has made me feel so complete,
my whole life was lived, just so we’d meet.
All these thoughts and more going through my head.
I fall asleep not worrying, but dreaming of you... instead

© Copyright 2003 Shayne Kenichi - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
1 posted 2003-03-21 04:39 AM


Nice...James
littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
2 posted 2003-03-21 05:01 AM


Tryst - what a nice take on this:

I fall asleep not worrying, but dreaming of you... instead

sweet dreams  xxoo

Little_One
Junior Member
since 2003-03-16
Posts 34
montana
3 posted 2003-03-21 08:50 AM


mmmmmmm

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