Open Poetry #25 |
Thoughts Anew...repost from Dark Poetry |
WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Can you come with pad and pen to bring me back remember when, back to the time of innocence can you come, must I insist? Bring me words of soft embrace of lovers hands that slowly trace, bring me this and solace too, must I scream and plead of you? Paint for me a picture show of laughter and a hug, you know. I'm put upon with drops of pain I'm dying in this acid rain. Can you use your words of power return to life defiled flower, have you the skill to please undo, wow me now, write thoughts anew. WhiteRose |
||
© Copyright 2003 Anne Thompson - All Rights Reserved | |||
inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
is anyone worth it, to have to plead with? good stuff, know from where you come........... |
||
WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Thank you inkedgoddess, I appreciate your comments, from one New Yorker to another Now I'm just a displaced yankee in the south [This message has been edited by WhiteRose (03-20-2003 10:58 PM).] |
||
ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
guess inkedgoddess hits the nail on the head, I wonder too who is worthy pleading to at times...I have been frustrated at being short-changed nice write..I can identify to some of this. [This message has been edited by ecrivan (03-20-2003 11:44 PM).] |
||
⇧ top of page ⇧ | ||
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. |